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RAE replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sure!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Hey, it’s me again, lol. I have a question. Is it fine to give a side character a POV if it’s for one or two chapters?
Here’s some context. If you guys remember Liv from chapter 5 (where Lilitu steals bread), I was thinking she could play a part in Lilitu’s story. She’s kind of secretly supporting the Paynes and I wanted…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now…Did she just leave?)
I did notice a bunch of posts that said anonymous.
This chapter is good too. I don’t have much feedback right now. I noticed one misspelling:
The robot ascended to a small section of the ceiling that held a cavity it…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)
I didn’t notice that before, but I went back and looked, and yeah. I guess she’s not on the forum anymore?
Great chapter! The bounce between present and past tense was very confusing, though. Were the parts in p…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)
Yes! I was hoping she didn’t leave….maybe she got her account deleted or smthn?
I like this chapter! My favorite part was how happy the robot got when he named her “Thing”. that was great!
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whaley replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
Hey Whale, just wanted to check in. I know you’ve been active, but haven’t made any response on this forum, so I’m perpetually worried that I may have offended you in any way by my words. If your not responding for any other reason, I completely understand, I just wanted to be sure.
I’m still awaiting responses from others as well…
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Kathleen replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
Sorry for suddenly going mia for a bit, one of my co-workers got sick so I had a few extra shifts this week and haven’t been able to get online until now!
Anyway, good to be back again, yet again!
It’s been going really well! I’ve been working, doing some writing (obviously,) and preparing for a two-year mission that will hop…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Sorry😅 I know how frustrating it can be when you see your brain child measured and prodded as if it were in the UNIT🤣 Your taking it really well though, and even with excitement, so that’s a really good mentality. Your showing wonderful meekness in that way, being open to learning and changing for the better. I would say that y…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
GUYS….thoughts on this book cover??? I made it last night and idk if I love it or hate it….

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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Although, would that really be the top of his concerns when he sees Ottoline? Both of them are in prison and she’s only part-Azer, so it doesn’t quite seem logical that he would be legitimately worried about her trying to get revenge. It’s a funny reaction, but it relies a lot on the reader connecting all the dots.
Yeah, normally that would…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Imagine the vessel is just the most dull character ever😂 That would be some interesting irony!
That would be funny, but I think it’s impossible or at least highly improbable. The Shard influences the vessel, so anyone with Whimsy would end up being…whimsical.
Even if the numbers aren’t innate, and that could very easily be a red h…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
That would actually work to display the shards with this theory.
Oh wait, you already said that lol.
I’m guessing there is some pattern in the Shards, and whatever it is you could probably display it with that chart. The numbers might not be part of the pattern, because apparently Sanderson said that some of the shards have num…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Cool! That would actually work to display the shards with this theory. The red square would be Feel, the green one would be Unite, the blue would be change, and the yellow would be survive.
Whimsy is definitely one of most intriguing shards. I’m very interested in seeing what he/she is like.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
What’s a sixteen-gon? Would it be a geometric shape with 16 angles? I was using a 4×4 grid, with the first row having 1-4, the second 5-8, the third 9-12, and the fourth 13-16. Then the first column was Feel, the second Unite, the third Change, and the fourth Survive. I’ve been trying to figure out if there is any pattern goi…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
However I’m beginning to see perhaps that there really is a theme of fundamental forces and laws of reality.
The pattern is very vague, even from my perspective when I know what all the shards are, except one that hasn’t been mentioned yet. It seems that there are probably four groups that they fit into. For example, it seems pre…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I just made a possible break through in a Cosmere theory people have been trying to crack for a long time. I’m not sure how much you know about the topic, so I won’t say much unless you want to here it. None of it is really spoilers, but it’s info you might not know yet, although most of it isn’t mentioned in any book. I won’t s…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
BWAHAHA we know your name, now we can hack you! hehe
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Don’t worry—we all have real names too! (At least, I would think so 👀)
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