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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.
There’s a planet in Star Wars called Anaxes that got destroyed by something (it never says what) and ends up being an asteroid belt kinda like that.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)
Also, I love how you deliberately misspelled Bucky’s name since she’s unfamiliar with it. What does she think of his metal arm?
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @freedomwriter76
UVAH
She walked forward in a daze as Bucky ushered them into a dim room to hide. As Uvah turned back towards the door however, her gaze caught on Bucky’s arm, illuminated for only a second as he shut the entrance. Left in darkness, she could only barely see the slice of dripping red running along his bicep, she…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @rae @princessachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @is-that-everyone?
Alright…
I think I’m gonna rejoin the castle. 😏
I have no idea what happened to the characters I left in here. XD
So I’m just going to pretend they are no longer there. Lol. I’m adding in Everton and Adrian. Because this mind end up disa…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Well, yeah, gold compounding is just absolutely ridiculous. Pewter and gold would be pretty good, because you could probably store the increased healing granted by pewter, and so store health without getting sick. That would be a good “tank.”
Compounding bronze would be pretty good, since it would let you never sleep. A bendalloy…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Yeah, I think he’s going to write them some time before the second arc of SA. Mistborn Era 3 is next I believe, and then the Elantris sequels.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
(Yes, yet another Brandon Sanderson topic. Maybe we could have just used the general Cosmere one, but 🤷♂️)
I just finished AoL and started SoS. In my opinion, AoL was thoroughly decent. I didn’t like the villain, because his motives seemed really confusing and he felt pretty flat. One thing I like about t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
It won’t be easy XD, but it isn’t going to be a super common sound, so it shouldn’t be too much of a hassle. In Word, you can set up autocorrect options, so I can just have it autocorrect those words.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Okay, thanks! Would it work to find a ‘j’ with an accent of some sort above it to represent the French J?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Wait. Now I’m thinking about it more, and since everyone knows that the Pythonos take the children away, then he wouldn’t think that his parents threw him away.
Maybe he just sees himself as worthless because of what the Pythonos do to the Paynes? Like you said, he can’t shake the feeling that somehow he deserved what the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
I have another question. So I noticed that the letter ‘C’ never makes an ‘s’ sound, but always a ‘K’ sound. Logically, that would mean that between C and K, only one is necessary. But I don’t like the looks of a lot of the words if I change them to the other, and some of them are real names, like Cadmus, which I would rather not…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
I’m doing what you suggested with finding consonant and vowel sounds. Do you happen to know how to write the sound that the ‘j’ in Eojold makes, phonetically? (It’s pronounced like the ‘g’ at the end of ‘garage’ or ‘sabotage.’) I can’t find any info online.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Thank you all for your replies!!
I think I’m leaning towards the taking the place of death more now. Thanks!!
And for those of you sobbing over Amir’s death….
Sorryyyyy 😭
It just has to happen. I know it’s gonna hurt writing it, but I also was planning Amir’s death from the very beginning…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Yeah, I did notice that. It always seemed kind of unnatural and kind of stilted to me. Would it make it better if I tied it into the fact that he’s an orphan? He kind of struggles with that, because he was abandoned and never knew his parents. He loves Azazel and Indie so so so much, but he feels like he’s not worthy to be treated…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Is this all one language then, or is there room for diversification. I think that it can all be rationalized as cohesive, though I noticed not only Greek names, but also traces from languages like French.
These are mostly all Arvendoran names, but some might be imported. For most of the 20,000 year period that these come from,…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @rae @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @smiley @sorry-my-brain-broke @anyone-else
I need help.
I’m trying to choose an ending for my novel. I thought I had it figured out, but now I’m doubting it. Either way, someone is going to die, so read at your own risk.
First, her…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae lol!!!
Here’s a story I wrote for this prompt…I didn’t revise it so it probably isn’t that good…but………..anyway…
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseinterested
Fragments
Her very soul aches.
Her heart is frozen.
Her hands are shaking.
She desperately wants to cry.
But she can’t. She can’t show it. She…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I think I forgot to congrat you!
CONGRATS!!!!!!!!! You won our first prompt contest✒!!!!!!!!!🎉🎉🎉🎉💕💕💕💕
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RAE replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr @jonas @beth-torres @thearcaneaxiom @euodia-vision @esther-c @hybridlore @smiley @trailblazer @whoever
@savannah_grace2009 posted our next prompt:
New Prompt: A person who keeps their emotions bottled up inside/won’t acknowledge their own pain to others.
Who would like to participate so we know? We don’t have a s…[Read more]
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