TheArcaneAxiom

@theducktator

That sounds very inconvenient to live under. No wonder your characters want to get out. Does just the Orb shrink, or does everything inside it shrink too?

Oh yes, very inconvenient 😑 lol

Just the Orb itself

I’m terrified that by the time I get to experience 4 feet of snow I’ll be too old to enjoy it. XD

Lol! For real XD

@freed_and_redeemed

Umm… my immediate answer would be Leon. I find him more relatable in a general sense and for some reason I just love him more. XD I wish I could give you more of a complete answer, lol. I guess I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said.

And that scene….

Girl!!! They’re smuggling Bibles together?!! I love that!! 😆

@freed_and_redeemed @stephie

Thanks!! 🥰

It was because i saw a pic of a girl riding piggyback with a guy and I was like, “I need to put this in my book!” XD

@magicalstories0611 Oooohhh love it Ry!! I haven’t read through the whole thing yet but I will come back later, because I wanna know more!

Thank you!! <3

@loopylin

Thanks! No that’s great!

He could possibly be from outside the city, but it would be difficult

But I definitely like the idea of him not knowing or caring about her making Vital! And it could be something she worry’s about or has dealt with in the past. A ‘you only care about the money’ situation.

@trailblazer

That was so sweet! I love sibling relationships. And I tell one of my brothers he needs to take a shower all the time. 😂

@magicalstories0611

Oooohhh love it Ry!!

I haven’t read through the whole thing yet but I will come back later, because I wanna know more!

(actually we’ve spent more time on the characters and world than the actual writing).

Think you’ve just summed up the entirety of an aspiring author’s process  😂. But figuring that stuff out befo…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

Thanks! I’m glad that helped!

@stephie

And here is a list of favorite books. It was too long to put in the first post. 😂

Freddy the Pig
Harry Potter
Alcatraz vs. the Evil Librarians
The Stormlight Archive
Tress of the Emerald Sea
Lord of the Rings
The Hobbit
Chronicles of Narnia
CS Lewis’ Space Trilogy
Wingfeather Saga
Out of Time series
An Unwilling Guest
Little Women s…[Read more]

@stephie

Hello! I have never had lemon juice on pancakes before. I do love maple syrup on lemon yoghurt pancakes though. I am definitely a night owl. I am regularly up past midnight reading. I have a lot of favorite authors, including L. M. Montgomery, Louisa May Alcott, Walter R. Brooks, Brandon Sanderson, Nadine Brandes, Jill Williamson,…[Read more]

🤩🤩 oh my gosh I love these ideas!!
Me and the friend iny writing this book with had had the idea for pain manipulation, which I guess can either make people feel pain when they’re not hurt, or take it away, which is kind of like what you said.
I absolutely love the idea about containing people’s diseases and illnesses! That sounds awesome!

@magicalstories0611

Hmm. Maybe she could have the power to heal people, but also to hurt people? Like she could take away their pain/illness by putting it in a jar or something, but than be able to easily infect/hurt people with it? Or maybe she could create food from nothing, but because of this she could also poison people really easily? Or if…[Read more]

It’s more like they have random powers because I think me and my friend came up with this rule that they have like a really powerful power and then the other powers are just free reign I guess 🙂

I’m looking for powers that could either be used for great good or great evil, ones with not a lot a gray area because Mira kind of manipulates people…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

Ooh, trauma! XD Anyway. Do you have a pattern for your character’s magic, or is it more like everyone just gets random powers because it fits them? And what kind of magic are you looking for for her?

@esther-c

Pretty much. It’s kinda like a screen, so it simulates what the outside should look like, but it’s not very good. So it can start pouring rain and lighting and thunder, but it may take a minute for the Orb to adjust and look like a cloudy sky.

That sounds very inconvenient to live under. No wonder your characters want to get out. Doe…[Read more]