TheArcaneAxiom

@theducktator

I know right??!!

@whalekeeper

Wyoh will not stop until she has your soul.

@whalekeeper @trailblazer

It said you posted, but I think Wyoh ate it.

@loopylin

I love it! 💛

@whalekeeper

I think Wyoh ate your post.

@loopylin

I love that. Looks amazing.

@esther-c

Yessss! It was phenomenal! Splendid! Awe inspiring! Help I need more words.

@rae

The reason for this scene is to show struggle. Nahim has kept to himself a piece of his life that comes back to haunt him every other night for four years. I doubt anyone would suddenly spill it all out. And the disappointment is also kinda purposeful, but since this is the second chapter, it’s not too great.

Yeah, that makes sense, but I w…[Read more]

@rae

1. No, not really.

2. If this is the end of a chapter, then no.

3. Yes. I could tell he was reluctant to share anything.

4. A violin or viola.

5. I kind of didn’t trust him. If he continued to be this kind I would come to love him though. I just have trust issues with nice characters. XD. They’re so often evil.

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h

OK! Here we go!

Everton

The figure who looked most like a man let out a deep laugh. “Attack? I could break every bone in your body without using a weapon, human.” The man—who Ev could now tell had blue skin—lowered the spear he held. Adrian stepped out from the around the corner, shooting Ev a disapproving glare.…[Read more]

@esther-c

Totally okay! I get you😂 I haven’t RPed in like… *mentally calculates, and gives up because of my awful concept of time* at least a month or something

And if you need me to RP something random to get things started again just lemme know!

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h

I’m sorry it’s been an eternity since I’ve RPed!! 😭 I’ll try my best to get the next RP written and posted this afternoon. I should have time. (Not that I didn’t have time before… I was just being lazy… XD)

@beth-torres

Ahhhh, I’m backkkk. Sorry it’s been like f o r e v e r 😭 I have no good excuse except procrastination, lol. XDD

Fynn

“Awesome.” Fynn grinned, rubbing his hands together. “Then into the dark we go.” He dramatically turned on his heel and led them out of the classroom. “The hallways are spooky in the dark.” Fynn wasn’t sure why…[Read more]

That’s a lot more code than last time I tried to post a pic….

Aaaaannnnddddd…. Nerp

Test, test…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Rae actually asked this same question a while back, and what she told you is basically what I would’ve said. Koshka’s advice was really good too. So yeah, I basically have nothing else to add. I feel like they covered everything I can think of. 😉

@theducktator

Ooh we did!! We were right in the path of totality. It was amazing!! Definitely unforgettable! I don’t even know how to describe it. Because the lighting kept getting funky, it was a little eerie, until it got as dark as it is right when the sun dips below the horizon. It’s so cool!!

@rae

1. I don’t think the scene is too short. I do have to wonder if it is necessary though. It’s hard to say without context, but it doesn’t seem to move the plot forward really. I also would consider that the reader is likely expecting to hear Nahim’s backstory and feel like they’re being cheated out of it.

2. No, I think it’s fine.

3. Yes. I…[Read more]

@trailblazer

My cousins were trying to get pictures, but I don’t think they succeeded. And Wyoh would most definitely not approve. I tried to post a meme earlier, and a ton of words showed up instead.