TheArcaneAxiom

@loopylin

Sweet! Ok, so you seem to be suggesting that the dragons were the ones who originally bore the artform of magic. Then, they taught it to the humans. But the humans need what ‘dragon stone’ to preform magic. So what is dragon stone? Is it something made from dragons? Perhaps dragon scales or something? If it’s an actual piece of a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

If you go on google, he’s written at least 50 so far. But yeah, it’s actually comical how fast he can get really good books out. He’s a brilliant author who just doesn’t stop! ‘Oh yeah, here’s these 3 different 5000 page books I’m writing right now guys, here’s my progress on each, and, oh right! I almost forgot, I might as well…[Read more]

@loopylin

I kinda like both. I think some work better for different stories. For example, I have a story based off of Alice in Wonderland that has a very soft magic system. The explanations for why things happen are very vague and often nonsensical, because if it were any other way, it would no longer be Wonderland.

But then there are great…

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@otherworldlyhistorian

About the auras. I personally don’t know much about dimensionality but I had more conceptualized it as this like mental awareness. It takes training to be able to use it and unenhanced it generally can only be expanded by about a foot from bare skin. Your basic aura (the non-enhanced one) can go through anything. The only t…

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@freedomwriter76

Love Bucky! N’nesha’s likely gonna have a pretty comical inner duologue with herself after hearing his intro!

princesachronicle22 @freedomwriter76

N’nesha

“We can’t have you running around with those gashes now can we?” Uvah asked. I didn’t like it, but she was right.

Neshe: That was a bit of a lack of foresight. If Uvah didn’t see me, I would have bled out. 

Neshe: I don’t like her still.

Uvah proceeded to remove the splinters from my arms…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Haha, lol, the timing is comical. I actually just started writing N’nesha’s. I’ll post in a bit so you can take it from there!

@otherworldlyhistorian

This is a really fascinating world! Thanks for answering my questions. I’m still confused about the Oskrion though, what resets it at the beginning of the month if it only explodes at the end of the year? Calendars are so fun to think about. Omialia has some interesting day night cycles as well. There’s two ‘suns’ that…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Liren

“This guy’s a fainter I guess. Think he passed out from pain this time?” the Man said, I still didn’t know his name. Kirrtes’s bluff seemed to be working on him unfortunately. Namal seemed far less trusting though. Perhaps she could catch me in a lie, then end things quickly.

“Yeah, convenient that it was right as he…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Awesome! I like this so far. I think that it’s Princesses turn to RP, so she’ll be able to kick that off. I still have to do the other RP first though. Can’t wait to see where this goes!

@mineralizedwritings

This looks Incredible! Brilliant lighting and style!

@freedomwriter76

Sorry we vanished for a while. Yeah, I think it’s good either way. It could be interesting for Bucky and Liren to meet, because they’ve had similar trails. But there could be some fun dynamics with N’nesha and Uvah, plus there’s only two of them in that group so far. Also I think We got some tension going on with Liren, Phervin…[Read more]

Awesome! Here’s a little bit on mine.

Liren is a man who is controlled by his sword, Kirrtes, which he wields in his left hand. When he pierces something with Kirrtes, he basically feels their experience. For a moment, he sees everything completely through their eyes. He feels the pain of a blade jabbed into your gut, he sees their life flash…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

One is currently with Liren from me, with Phervin and Namal from @princesschronical22. Then Our other is N’nesha from me, and Uvah from Princess. Do you need a break down for any of those characters?

@freedomwriter76

Currently I’ve only been in two groups, both of which are only with @princesschronicals22 so far. So maybe you could join one of those. I could also put in another character, maybe Tailen.

@esther-c

Love those! Emperors new groove is the best!

@otherworldlyhistorian

Yep! Hard magic is so fun to contemplate!

Your world sounds super cool! I love how your combining things like lunar calendars, light, chemistry, and a bunch of other concepts into the magic.

Ok, I got questions.

You say the Oskrion Complex is a imploding celestial structure. So does it appear to be slowly shrinking over…[Read more]

@mkfairygirl

Thanks! Yeah, that sounds really cool! So it looks like you got a elemental magic system going on. It sounds a lot like Last Airbender with the premise of elemental countries. Are you aiming for that image? An older worldbuilding project I did was essentially just Last Airbender, except instead of the four elements, I did the four…[Read more]

@acancello

Thanks! I like your writing as well. You can see Eddie through the rational and technicality’s he gives to justify his behavior, something we all can related to at times.

I like the writing you gave for Jade as well. You show her character by the attention she immediately gains from a crowd in a train station, something that would be…[Read more]