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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 5 days ago
thx.
I did have a scene before this one, but I didn’t deem it ready for posting, since there are a few things I want to smooth out first. Hopefully that scene will make it flow better.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @whalekeeper @keilah-h
Sorry for not posting in eight days. I hit Writer’s Block while trying to edit the next story to go on here and writing the next one 🙁
I’m not sure how long until I can post the full thing, but until then, I’m gonna post a snippet of the next…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
Kinda random, but I wasn’t sure where else to ask this cause it technically is a drawing-related question: What did you guys imagine Old Hunter to be like? Did you have a specific appearance in mind for him when you read about him?
I think I imagined him looking like Sniper exactly older and some things off with his appearance like m…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Thank you!!
Indeed lol.
The first three chapters are pretty short because I wasn’t too invested in them lol.
Thank you so much for the critiques, I 100% agree with all of them. I used telling in this specifically because I didn’t know what to write to make it longer, so I’ll try using the suggestions for showi…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint you’re welcome! Looking forward to book 2!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@theducktator RIP pennies.
Although I heard the reason was because copper and zinc and whatever else they were using to make ’em was getting too expensive for a coin whose value is 1 cent.
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Andrew replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Feb. 15 sounds good, thx
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@theshadow hmmmm….Interesting! we’ll have to see where it goes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks ago
My drawing from two days ago turned into a sort of comic. My favorite part is for some reason the feathers flying around the sound effect.
I was gonna say “slight unrealistic blood warning” then I realized my camera barely picked it up lol
Gonna use it as an illustration for my fic, specifically this scene:
…we sprinted past the window,…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
@loopylin yesss I remember those!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 2 weeks ago
@theshadow lol they’re nothing like each other but hey, that works.
@the_lost-journal funny enough I don’t find those guy names ugly.
They make me think of grumpy old men, but not necessarily in an “ugly” kinda way.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal awww that’s cute!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @hybridlore @the_lost-journal
Okay, well here’s the first chapter. I’m not a huge fan of it, but the other draft first chapter wasn’t great either. So critiques are definitely appreciated.
Chapter 1
“You ever wondered what it would be like to leave Rosen?”
Elina’s eyebrows shot up, “Why? Do you intend to?”
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
Thanks, it’ll be a little creepy, though it’s not the main focus.
Lol thank you.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 2 weeks ago
Cool, lol. I’ll probably have him in the back of my mind now every time I write with my Emmerich XD.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Sounds good.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
That’s not my art btw…..lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
And this is them in “modern” times (that is, at the time the story takes place)
Kinda surprised no one threw in a joke about these guys aging badly. Apart from Old Heavy, at least, who’s not shown in this picture but basically looks like the version above with gray hair instead of black.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
For context, here’s his squad if you weren’t familiar with them. This is them when they were younger and the main team fighting.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Kinda random, but I wasn’t sure where else to ask this cause it technically is a drawing-related question: What did you guys imagine Old Hunter to be like? Did you have a specific appearance in mind for him when you read about him?
I was thinking of drawing him interrogating Huntress as an illustration for the fanfic, and I…[Read more]
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