@tabitha-cassandra
Active 5 years ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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ella replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Hey Wyn!! Ooo, I’m so glad that you like Emiyn!!! Yes, I agree about the transition. I didn’t really notice that, haha (that’s what y’all are for, right? 😜). Also, I’m really glad you like the tone! Yep, it’s my old friend show-don’t-tell again… we have a long history, lol! And I totally get that about flashbacks instead of exp…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Hey y'all, I'm new! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
(fyi, i don’t know why i tagged myself earlier–i do that when i’m thinking about two things at once, lol)
Nice!! That’s really cool!
Yep, I get that. I was like that for A LONG time, but I recently started planning and now it works better for me.Â
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Wyn Rose replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
1) Yes! I found the way you started the story really drew me in with the description and the feeling the writing evoked. The first paragraph really set the tone of the scene!
2)Â Yeah, I though Emiyn was interesting. I felt like the section where she spoke about her sister especially gave more dimension to her character and made me warm…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Hey Jenna! Ooo, good, so glad you’ll read it!!! 😃 Yep, I love spec-fic too. ❤
Hey Issa! Aww, thanks SO much!!!! ❤ That means a lot–you’re so good at making peoples’ days, lol!! 😜 And thanks for reading!!
Hey Daisy! Thanks for reading and I hope you like it!! 😃
Hey Katherine! Of co…[Read more]
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Wyn Rose replied to the topic Hey y'all, I'm new! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
I’m not sure what my favorite part of living here is, but I definitely appreciate some of the beautiful landscapes. 🙂
I love that part too! There are so many awesome moments to choose from… One of my personal favorite parts is when Sam carries Frodo up Mount Doom.
Those sound interesting! It’s always difficult to decide between…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Cool website! 😀 I definitely think it’s a good idea to have a website, but a email list/newsletter is also SUPER important for updates and things (more so than a blog, in my opinion). I use Mailchimp to manage my email lists and newsletters, which has worked out well for my author business so far. 🙂
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Lin replied to the topic Writers' Corner 01 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
I come before you two today to bequeath a request…ahem. Both of you guys have awesome sites, so I just wanted some advice on what I should do with mine, haha.
I don’t really want to blog, but should I set up a space for announcements? If so, how should I do it? Or should I do a newsletter instead? And if so, do any of…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Don’t forget to blink! Thank you so much though!
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
@abigail-m Thank you!
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Wyn Rose replied to the topic Hey y'all, I'm new! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Hi Jodi! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I just joined recently as well. Oregon sounds really nice! (I live in Canada)
I also love Lord of the Rings! Do you have a favorite part (or parts) from the books/movies?
You write fantasy and historical fiction? I’m planning to write a fantasy novel after I finish my current WIP, but I’ve haven’t…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Ooh, YA futuristic spec-fic? Sounds like my thing. 😉 I’ll definitely be reading it; thanks for letting us!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Where do you find motivation? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Sounds good, I’ll leave the grammar edits on the suggestions bar:)
Lioness’s first chapter is just SO intriguing, I’d love to read more if you decide to post the second chapter! -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Ah, that’s amazing! Cedulnians? They sound sooo interesting:)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
I love those collages, they are amazing! 😀
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
@issawriter7 Thank you so much! I love your graphic as well!
@writerlexi1216 Thanks! I want to know who they are as well, haha…
@mkfairygirl Thank you so much!
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago

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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago

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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Welp, I’ve started on another series of aesthetics for the purpose of character development for the next arc of Thirteen Ways to Infinity…my villain group, the Jehayi! I’ve done three today, starting off first with the leader, Star Runner!

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ella and
Jodi Maile are now friends 5 years, 2 months ago - Load More

