Sunny421

@freedomwriter76

They’re all brats, but he’s the worst. XD

Almarrin

He looked at the boy for a long moment, before a small smile turned up the corner of his mouth, softening his otherwise hard features. “Not many do. I’m Almarrin Woden. Welcome to my table. Any if you like…whatever this stuff is?” He waved a hand to the glistening glob on his…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Okay, this is going to be a little funny.

Almarrin

Long lines of students were gathering for lunch, the mess hall (that’s what he calls it) quickly filling. With his back firmly planted in the wall, Almarrin shifted to gain a better view.

Three boys were coming this way, although there were many tables still open closer to the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t know exactly whom, but I was thinking either Adolphus and Dietrich, or another set of henchmen.

@freedomwriter76

Maybe they can run into Almarrin? I’m thinking that a lot of the kids here see him and think he’s a bully, because of his size and reserved manner, so he hasn’t actually met any kids here.

Which is kind of fine too, since he’s probably preoccupied with spying on the bad guys and forming plans to systematically take them down. So…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 we’re still on the road headed home, so we listened online. It was very good, about how praise heals, and trials grow patience ect. (From James and Romans). @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Oh Hitchens has no idea how close he came to one of those brothers hunting him down.

And um…so the poetic justice of using one of the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Let’s see…

Viktor

As soon as the man walked up, Viktor heard Reúven’s voice in a low mutter.

“What fine boots. Very much the officer.”

Viktor’s eyes went wide. He spread his feet and gripped his sword, ready. Esen shifted on his shoulders to raise her crest in answer to his…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

AWWWW….

@godlyfantasy12

Inglor

“Whoop-de-doo? That’s a phrase I’ve never heard before.” Mirth danced in his leaf green eyes. “But then, I’ve never been around many other peoples before.”

Almarrin

Psychology was such an interesting thing, especially when it could be studied through observation. From his vantage point behind a door he could hear one…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Okay y’all!

Zlatan

The little fox whimpered in a fitful sleep, his head jerking slightly as if he was still fighting. Zlatan frowned.

Nyx needed help, yet how could he get him it, here in a forsaken castle.

There was always…but what if…he shook his head and dug out the little green…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Inglor

What did elves smell like?

He shook his head and turned back to Luna.

“I look young because I am young. Fifty years of my life are like fifteen of others. You see,” he sighed, wondering how to explain. “I am an Alve, one of the fair folk, child of the morning star.”

She still looked a bit confused, but he hoped un…[Read more]

@arien

Oh! I love it. The characters are intriguing, the setting/world is interesting, and the concept is really fun. I want to read the rest!

I especially liked the way you describe the characters bit by bit. The piece where the candlelight is illuminating Aedan’s face was an especially fine part to read. I love the way it formed his features…[Read more]

Eira

At last, class in over. I gather my things and brush my hair back over one shoulder. It slips through my fingers like limp silk, slight waves all that is left of my curls. With a sigh I heave my backpack into place and shuffle from the room into another empty hall. Why the schedule here makes no sense, I don’t know nor do I care.

My feet…[Read more]

@felicity

I stalked for some time too. It’s totally fun!

Why thank you, I thought so too. XD

@godlyfantasy12

I hope you don’t mind me putting them in the same class, but I had another scene idea…

Inglor

Nyx wanted to skip class, that much was clear.  He frowned slightly and traced the leaf on his shirt collar. “Geometry? I have that also.” He glanced at Almarrin.

“Psychology of aggression.” The grey eyes were smiling.

“Ai! Well…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Viktor

“Ah, thanks anyway! I’ll find him after class.”

Concern flooded through him, filling his eyes and face. He leaned forward and touched the back of her seat.

“Is this a… brother?”

She sighed. “My little brother.”

“When did he disappear? Is this like him?”

Grimm gave a low, sympathetic laugh and Jocelyn huffed. “He s…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Oooo, I want more of these characters, even if I’m not exactly a romance reader. That does help with the background. =)

@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w

Ok!

Reúven & others

Well, here they were. Literature right off the top. Reúven pulled a chair out for Liora and he and Viktor sat down on either side.

The teacher had stepped out to talk with another teacher in the hall, letting the  students settle in before class started. She wa…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Almarrin

The elf smiled. “Êl síla erin lû e-govaned vîn, Dolunay, Nyx. I am Inglor Avelorion, and this is my friend Almarrin Woden.”

Almarrin bowed, but his attention was moving on. “Classes, Inglor.”

“Brother,” Inglor clamped a hand on his arm. “Are these your manners?”

“I bowe…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Go pound em, Ezra!!!!

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Yes, the Alven have pointed ears, but they’re regular size. (Luna is adorable)

Inglor

Most of the students here walked in shadow as if fear itself lurked in the corners. They also gave Almarrin and him a wide berth. He frowned, the dance in his step diminishing.

Then a smile, one bright,…[Read more]