@starshiness
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I can see her being less powerful since she’s second-gen. But still.
Can you tell I’m really enjoying helping you brainstorm?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 awww ok! See you….sometime, i guess.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I could tell lol
does that mean she’s also got superpowerful eyesight? Like, with training and a decent rifle, she could hit things from as far away as he can? (For reference, the “10 clicks” Hunter mentions when he first introduced Crosshair is ten kilometers, or about six miles. No sniper in our world has ever managed to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
Trust me, you don’t want me to go into a possible family tree rant.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins it certainly would be…
Except I’m not saying your charrie and my charrie are literally the same person. What I’m thinking of is two separate timelines, in which what would be the same character went through different situations. Something happened to Cross’s love interest in your story (idk her name here, but the charrie in my…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium I see. Makes sense, since she doesn’t have to copy a whole mind for a non-sentient creature.
Hey, maybe that’s how they meet him–they see a dragon fly overhead, she tries to imitate him but can’t and realized he’s a sentient being, likely as lost as they are?
It’s not a great idea but I just wanted to throw it out there.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years, 7 months ago
@trailblazer Yes!! On Sunday my pastor was talking about Peter being of little faith and said one way how we grow to greater faith is hearing of God’s work in others’ lives. God faithfulness bolsters our faith. “God did that for you? Well, I figure He will work through this thing He’s calling me to.”
And if you make that topic, please tag me…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic so I'm back and looking for some alpha readers in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 7 months ago
@joy-calle
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
He’s kinda talking about both of them.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collin ah ok makes sense!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I know, it’s so funny lol
how are my fanfics coming along? Lots of ideas, not a lot of them on paper, but whatever. Most of what I’ve done pertaining to fanfics are drawing the characters involved, but hey…that counts, right?
I’m currently brainstorming covers for a prequel story.
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ami
“What? No way. Not permanently. I was just heading out because I was gonna meet up with a friend. He wanted to hang out, so I thought I’d hang out with him for a bit. Everything’s good around here, trust me.” He winked.
She furrowed her brow. That was an oddly long explanation. “Okay… if you’re sure. I’ll be in there,” sh…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Amidala
“Don’t worry about it. I was more confused than anything. You looked like you were having fun though, so you should go back to doing that.”
Ami blinked a few times, feeling her cheeks flush. There she went overreacting again. Why did she always feel like she had to make sure everything was okay? “Oh, um, ok.” She…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 very cool! That’s a good topic to write about these days.
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Esther replied to the topic so I'm back and looking for some alpha readers in the forum Publishing & Platform 2 years, 7 months ago
Ooh, sounds awesome!
I’m not sure I’ll be able to do it though. I’ll think about it and then get back to you 🙂
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 cool, what is it?
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ofc! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ami
Ami followed him after a quick glance at the girl, fumbling for something to break the awkward silence. Finally, she sighed and paused. “Am I reading too much into the situation?”
Clint turned to face her.
“What I mean is—” she sighed. Why did she have to make it all awkward in the first place? “I don’t know. You just seem…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I enjoy every chapter 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Mystery ideas in the forum Mystery 2 years, 7 months ago
I’ve read some mysteries, but I’ve never written one before. 😅 I think I’d recommend to start backwards though. Where do you want the mystery to lead the characters?/What’s the end result? And how are they going to get there? What clues lead them to that point?
Besides that, I’d just say to read mysteries and notice the trends, a…[Read more]
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