Starshiness

@awsumfaith lolll nice! A lil bit of humor always helps a story out

@kyronthearcanin You may definitely have a point there XD

@awsumfaith Ooooooooooops, so I somehow managed to miss your reply… from two pages ago…

Haha, glad to hear it! Ooo ok cool! I did read some of your earlier posts there and I love the feel of the Scavenger pirates. They sound like a great little bunch! I get the feeling that they might have some humorous moments.

Goshhhh two pirate writers,…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin !!!!

Hmm… personally I’m willing to be a little of both is involved…

@awsumfaith Ahh ok nice👌🏽

@freedomwriter76 Lollll

@kyronthearcanin HAHAH FRRR that exact face says it all 😭

@awsumfaith Wooowww looks great! I’m afraid I know very little about maps (trying to make one for my own world is proving to be somewhat difficult 🤦🏽‍♀️) so I don’t have any advice to offer, but everything looks pretty cool to me! I do love the name Doran for your kingdom, it’s simple but sounds very… mm majestic? I’m curious about the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Girl, that’s the best part of poetry, there really aren’t too many rules XD. Your poems are so beautiful! 💕 I especially love that last one

@elanor Being brown-eyed myself I appreciate these sentiments XD That was beautiful! So often we hear about a person’s dazzling blue or green eyes (don’t get me wrong, I find a pair of deep…[Read more]

*gasp* a whole forum just for writing memes?! This is amazing 😍 I literally have a Pinterest board with nearly 100 memes, plenty of ammo here XD

*apologies for if I happen to post something that has already been posted by someone else within the thirteen pages of this forum I do not have the time to read in entirety XD*

@esther-c Yesssss and I second the motion!! Piper and Griffin. Griffin and Piper. They sound good together 👌🏽

@she-is-a-pirate Ahoy there matey! Aaaand that’s as far as my pirate lingo goes but EEEE MORE PIRATE STORY WRITERS?!?!! This is amazing, I hope you’ll share snippets with us 😉

Anyhoo, hi and welcome to KP! I’m Starshiness! Why does that suddenly feel like such a mouthful for one word?! Maybe I should start going by Star around here… we’ll see.…[Read more]

@elanor Thank you!! Your poem is beautiful as well; what a joy to be inspired by the attributes of our God and create poetry from it in our meditations!

@janellebelovedpig Thanks! 😊 Well kinda! I’ve never had to lose someone close to me or have a friend who had to “fight to live” in that sense, but the prompt this grew from was “give someone a…[Read more]

@acancello I do!! Poetry is such a fun genre to explore, not to mention it’s satisfying to write something short you can actually finish… unlike my novel WIP… 😂 Here’s one of my really short poems where I experimented with spacing and condensation of thought through metaphor.

Dandelions

Embodiment of

Dreams

S c a t t e r e d

With…[Read more]

Ooo how fun!! Mind if I join 👀

(I vote for a boy charrie too btw)

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I drop my gaze from hers. “I, um… well… I wanted to know your secret.”

She pushed her face closer to mine, her sea-green eyes staring at me suspiciously. “How did you know I had a secret?”

I shrug. “‘Cause you acted like it.”

Judging by the way she scrunched her…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig Helloooo! *waves* It’s a pleasure to meet you and read this gorgeous work of poetry! I love the use of slant rhyme, it’s so perfect for this piece; it sounds like a literal psalm from the Bible! Oo you’re writing an allegory?? Coolio, me too!!

As for a few words on poetry punctuation, I would say that it’s not always necessary…[Read more]

@esther-c Of course, I’m glad I could say something useful!

@esther-c

Oh my goodness this was so beautiful, so sad but so well-written!! Augh, what a tender, beautiful couple, that hurt when I realized she died 😭. I haven’t read the Wingfeather Saga (not yet at least!) so I was glad this didn’t need any background knowledge.

The only critique I might offer would be this: during Meira’s internal struggle…[Read more]