@starofthenorth
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
Chapter 5 I think?
@felicity @starofthenorth @arien @theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyoneelse!
Random art of Tauren: he is probably like 8 here? idk. I dunno if he still plays guitar 😂
Tauren walks out the door with purpose, having chosen to wear a sweater with his overalls instead of his work…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @am I missing anyone on this topic?
Hello again, amazing, talented people!!! Unfortunately I got sick on Monday so I haven’t been on here since, but I’m finally starting to feel better! (my head’s cleared enough to be able to make coherent…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @starofthenorth @arien @freedomwriter76 @anyoneelse
Um… here’s the comic I wrote when I was eightish. Enjoy?
(I’m putting it in a different post so it doesn’t disappear)
(Also, it has no connections to DC’s Supergirl. They have different colors, okay? And plagiarism doesn’t exist for eight-year-olds.)
🤣
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Haha, yes! 11-year-old romance! 😂
“Well, here thou art, Lady. I shall see the sometime in the near future.”
Front door after a date, Shakespeare style 😆
I shoved my hand behind my bookshelf and grabbed my mother’s cake recipe.
“That was hard romancing. I need cake.” 🤣🍰
It doesn’t even make sense!
Yeah, there were a couple spots..…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth
So here is one of the first things I wrote. It’s called “The Adventure #2.” I don’t know what happened to “The Adventure #1” but it did exist. It was about my stuffed animals coming alive and going under my bed to see what was there. I had so many stuffed animals, LOL.…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
No worries, thanks for reading!
So sorry it took me so long to reply! I LOVE it!! Great job!
And I like your drawing style, too.
Thank you! Glad you like it! 😁
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76@lightoverdarkness6 @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @felicity @anyone @arien @starofthenorth
(Pls read chapter 3 first if you haven’t 😀)
Chapter 4
“Dad I’m going to go hang out with some friends.” Keiryn calls into the living room from the door.
Lesli glances up briefly from her writing, but quickly glanc…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76 (why do I try to put a dash in your name like every time?!) @lightoverdarkness6 @folith-feolin (I can finally spell your name without using something for reference 😂) @whalekeeper @felicity
@anyone @arien @starofthenorth
Hey if yall are interested heres some of my story! If you want to read it I…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@starofthenorth oh man I laughed at the Mr Strawberry oooone!! Our little kid brains are just so cute and cringy….
@freedomwriter76 AHHHH NO NO NO NO NO!!!! *makes a cross with fingers* NEH NEH NEH!!! NO RIKER AS A VILLAIN!! NIET!!! 😭
So….
I always made stories, mostly in notebooks drawing during services, and mostly about orp…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
Ehh–actually I don’t. Quite. Yet.
Understandable 😂😂
Hmm, I don’t know exactly what the genre is. Fantasy, but anything more specific than that I don’t know. But basically the plot is
Okay, cool! I love fantasy, probably my favorite genre. And naw, it doesn’t sound silly.
And a disclaimer: though I do write about “magic,…
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Arien replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Great topic!
@felicity @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth @theloonyone
This is all so great you guys! I like the cat ballerinas too. 🙂
So unfortunately, I do not have the first book I started to write . . . I was 7 or 8 and I was getting bored during my sister’s cello lesson so I started writing The Mystery of the Queen’s…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
(lol I have a lot. I saved everything from when I was little)
Haha, same! And even though they all sat and did nothing for a while, I’m glad I can bring them out into the open now. Beware, they’re a little dusty.
I think I was about 7 when I wrote this story. My dad lovingly typed it for me and I sent it to all my relatives for Ch…
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Felicity replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
I love the background! It seems they don’t get along with each other a lot, so I’m wondering along @felicity‘s lines. How are they going to make up? I’m sure you know though 😁😂
I also saw that you said romance is only a subplot. What is the first genre?
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TheLoonyOne started the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Our conversation of old writing gave me an idea, so…
@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @folith-feolin @lightoverdarkness6 @ava-blue @felicity @arien @starofthenorth @anyoneelse
So this is partly based on a conversation about old writing and the podcast Do Your Worst (check it out, guys. And JK Studios). Basically, let’s share all…[Read more]
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Madelyn replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
Glad to be of service!! 😉
Oooh, I love that scene!! You’re doing great with the tension between them 😀
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Felicity replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
I love organs, especially when the organist really pulls the stops on a hymn like “How Great Thou Art!”
That is one of the most beautiful things ever! Tear-jerking! Makes me think there might be organs in heaven… wait, imagine an organ in heaven?! A perfect, heavenly organ!!!!! 😀
Bagpipes just make me happy. I don’t know why. …
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Felicity replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
Wow! I really feel the tension and conflicting emotion here! Great job!
I’m curious how you make Christopher and Briana finally forgive each other… 🙂
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Koshka replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
Oooo, I want more of these characters, even if I’m not exactly a romance reader. That does help with the background. =)
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