Erica

@loopylin

Oh, I’m so sorry!! I’m just rocking the ‘mistaking someones character for another’ thing this month XD, right @mineralizedwritings ? XD.

For some reason, I thought Kad was your character i guess bc he’s in the group with Eddie and Ellie (Those are your charries right?) and Dante and Rueben and others.

You can probably just ignore my…

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@loopylin

Okay! Good ideas! Kad, you mean?

@felicity

TOTALLY!!!!

YES!! XD

Ok I will. 🙂

Hehe…your story is so cute. I love how…

The puppie’s parents were not sweet to them and they died. Heavenly Father killed the parents because they were mean to their children.
That’s so good!!! 😀

Yay!! I just read the 2nd chapter, and it’s so cute!! That’s actually really good for 10-11! I’m gonna g…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Aww, thanks. There’s plenty more scenes I could share . . .

Yeah go for it!! I want to read it!

@starofthenorth

Haha, same. In this story Irene is just like “Do I like this guy?” and then he (the guy she likes is named Arthur) is like “Hey, I like you.” And she’s like “He loves me!!! I love him too.” And her dad is like “Marry this Edward guy.” And she says “I don’t want to.” And he says “Why?” And she’s like “I like this other guy named…

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@loopylin

I know right? I was obsessed with Quakers and all people who used to say “thee” and “thou”. 😀

@freedomwriter76

Also, what you’re writing about has been a pretty…well…topic that many people have been really interested and invested in, so I think that will help

Yeah I know what you mean.

But, I really, honestly, think it probably depends on the person…

…I’m probably not helpful at all. XDXDXD

Ok that makes sense. Yeah you are!! 😀

@koshka

Wow. I like your set up. You did a very good job of an intro.

Thank you!!

I did feel like some things were a little too stated, and perhaps not quite smooth.

Yes you’re right. I am experimenting with a newer writing style and not sure if I like the way it flows. I think to counter my normal long, rambling prose, I kind of chopped things…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

messed up your tag up there. Plus I just like blowing up your notifications.

@freedomwriter76

Oh and can i get your honest opinion? I’ve learned that first chapters are supposed to grab reader’s attentions and “hit the ground running”. Do you think mine does that? I’ve always struggled with slow beginnings, because for some reason I just really like writing slow beginnings. 😂😂 Do you think that’ll hinder the reader’s…[Read more]

@freedomwritier76

It’s my device, trust me. XD

Ok. I will. 😀 Do you know how to indent paragraphs on here? Because I indented all my paragraphs in the story and when I posted it they un-indented. 🙁 Does it do that to you too?

You are sooo welcome!!! <333 And yeah, don’t be!!! Everyone on here is so supportive.

Oh yeah!! It’s so gre…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Okay, so…my computer won’t let me access your story (stupid technology!!!)

Did i do something wrong when I posted it or is it just your device? I’m still figuring out how to use this forum…

I love it!

The characters all seem so real, and I love them already!

But I love where the story is heading. 😉

I’m sure you’ve put a lot o…

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@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12

Here’s chapter two of the French-Revolution story I wrote when I was 10/11. 😀 The first chapter is on here somewhere!!

With original spelling and punctuation:

Life in the Castel -chapter two            Elisabeth de Medicis

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@lightoverdarkness6

Ach! I forgot the six. 😀

@lightoverdarkness6

There’s this part in the older one. Or maybe it is in the new one, where Willy and Charlie fell through the roof of Charlie’s house in an elevator, and one of his grandmas is lying in bed, and she leans up and says: “I think someones at the door.”or something of that accord. Me and my brother love that part!! It’s hilarious.…

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@lightoverdarkness

YES!!! Riker Wrath XD. Not on you! But DEFINITELY on Riker’s abusers (terrible people that never should’ve been born!!!!!!!!)

TOTALLY!!!!

I found yours!! Yes, please share the second chapter!! It was so cute! I loved the historical vibe–even if you didn’t know much about history at that time XD :).

Ok I will. 🙂

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@freedomwriter76

Your tag didn’t work 🙂

freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity

Okay, heres the beginning of my old story, that I already posted so you won’t be completely lost bc it just plunges right back in XD.

Once apon a time there was a camel. The camel loved to drink some water at the forest and he swam across the ocean so he could get some water…

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@freedomwriter76

I get that!!! 😉

Thats good! Sometimes I feel like I’m so awkward and nobody gets it XDD.

Maybe so. 🙂

Yeah!

Lol, I get that. XDXDXDXD

🙂 XDD

Agreed!!! 😀 It’s just a great story all in all. 😉

Yes!!! I actually have a sweet memory watching the newer one! I was about 6,  at my grandparents house, listening to my dad and grandpa ta…[Read more]