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@godlyfantasy12

Now as for the loud Vs quiet…I would advice steering clear of Layson changing and becoming totally quiet to please Kaine or changing himself completely, but he can adjust a few things maybe to be just a bit calmer around the boy until he becomes more familiar with him, but Kaine will also need to grow too as the time goes on.…

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@starofthenorth

Hi there! I found a few names too!

cerritulus (In Latin it means weird 😅😂)

sciurus (Latin. Means squirrel)

ardilla (Squirrel in Spanish)

Gwyllt (Wild in Spanish)

And just some names I made up:

Cajats, Zoogers, Sperves, Flurbes, Gluxes, Livops, and Striverxs. 😂😅😊 Hope that helps!

@godlyfantasy12

Not exactly sure what you mean by pov characters…

It’s eventually going to be comic style, so there isn’t much of a pov. Anybody’s thoughts can be shown too.

Layson is 19, I think Everly is 22. Layson is really mature for his age.

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@godlyfantasy12 @anyone else who wants to help!

Oh, great advice!

So here’s my problem:

Kaine, Everly’s younger brother has been caring for here pretty intensely since she got injured about 6 months prior. Exuasting himself so that she can be comfortable has basically become a way of life for him. He feels it’s the least he can do, because she…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Those points are really good!

In one of my WIP’s I have romance between a non-Christian girl and a Christian guy that ends up shattering because the girl doesn’t understand why he is so passionate about Jesus. She asks, “Can’t you just keep your religion in the background?” And he has to tell her, “No, that’s not how it works.”

@esther-c

Absolutely!! Yeah, add whoever you need😊.

And anyone else can add any Charlie’s they want to! The more the merrier 😂.

@godlyfantasy12

Totally!

@esther-c

See that?! You’ve got this girl!

@godlyfantasy12

The way I see it, people won’t notice if language isn’t there, but they will notice if it is.

Good point. Very good point.

Hey I’m in if you start a Romance Subplots topic!

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah, good thoughts. That’s better than writing the actual word for sure.

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks!

Yours are great too! Especially Tauren. <3

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone

Okay! Well, we’re kinda just wandering around the castle. Any of you have a villain you can bring in? Or a cool room to find?

@godlyfantasy12 you can bring in Aramis, Edrich, and/or Lilith, if you like.

Lyla and Matthew

“Crosshair, no need to be so harsh,” A young woman said, walking out f…[Read more]

@felicity

Oh I like it! Interesting fears there, a lot of ones I don’t usually see in books!

@wilder-w

Editing scares me. That’s why I just keep starting new books and telling myself that the old books aren’t good enough to publish. (I mean, they probably aren’t, but I’ve been writing for at least four years now and I think I should move past the writing-first-drafts stage at some point). Anyway, sending you a hug and lots of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

How about we make a forum topic for romance subplots? If y’all want to?

Yeah! That sounds good.

 

 

As for Paxton….

IKR?! Quite honestly idk. I just have a thing for adorable little boys and had to have one in my series. Plus it does make the things he go thru…a lot worse…but, also makes the happier parts, the hope he keeps a…

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@esther-c

Thanks! No that’s ok! I get it! And yeah it is a lot to catch up on 😅

@godlyfantasy12

lol no I have not met him! Feel free to share about him if you like!

I actually asked you about your experience in charrie romances in another forum… I believe you may have missed it XD

But anyways I would love some advice if you have any XD I have no idea what I’m doing with it

@godlyfantasy12

Ikr? He just seems… interesting 🤣 hey that makes a romance better if you have interesting characters. And yeah, I like him being sincere, it’s sweet!

@godlyfantasy12
Thanks! 😀

@wilder-w

Oh that was so good! Not sure if I like Shawn… I half like him but he seems so smug lol!