Erica

@mineralizedwritings

Well, this is a very common topic for me and my older sister 😂🤣 The type of guys we like is pretty different, so we like to poke fun at each other for it. “Would you date a guy who (insert everything the other person likes) and also has a really ugly pet monkey? (But… he takes really good care of it and it’s for emoti…

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@folith-feolin

Thanks for the help!

(as your first chapter seemed to be told from the 1st person pov I’m going to assume that your WIP is in 1st person (I’m also assuming your WIP is a multinarrative story (meaning it is told from the point of view of multiple characters))

So this book (working title: A Dream Shattered), the sequel to A Dream Com…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks for your response! And sorry, I don’t think my post was very coherent, I was writing it super fast before dinner and my brain was already very worn out from the day, so sorry about that! I’ll try to explain better. 😊

Is he being forced to be a soldier? Or is this something he’s wanting to do to prove himself? This will tell…

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Ooh, fun topic!

@godlyfantasy12 I’ve read only a little of what you’ve written, here and there (I haven’t been following the character castle or the school) but I think that Ara and November’s relationship is pretty cute! Especially because they’re best friends but somehow Ara doesn’t see that November’s like, head over heels in a giant crush on…[Read more]

@esther-c

Perfect 😉!

@godlyfatasy12

Oh and I do have a scene like that

When Lesli is meeting Everly for the first time (already awkward because they hardly see other pople, much less somebody there age) Tauern comes running out saying he saw a frog (snake) in a tree, he’s going to poke it to see if it jumps, and wants to know if Lesli wants to watch, and then he…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

MY THIRD TIME WRITING THIS KP STOP EATING THEMMMM

my post gets shorter every time because I have to re-wright it sorry lol…

I would love to know what Nyx would look like as a human…. if he does shapeshift. And I don’t think there is anything odd about it. It’s a bit different with a romance, but as long as they have a human…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

LOl I guess that counts 😂

sounds interesting!

@everyone

I just copy and pasted all of the tips into a document that I’m going to reflect on often 🤣😊.

@godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @felicity @sarafini @

Wow!!! Thank you all so much for the tips and ideas!!! As soon as y’all started sharing ideas, my brain was just like gushing with more ideas about other parts of the story!! So I have a TON of stuff to work with now 😃! Thank you all so much 😊!!

@sarafini

Ooh that sounds interesting! When you s…[Read more]

@felicity

Ok! Oh fun! Enjoy the nutcracker play!!!!

Thank you! It was fun! The dancers were so graceful. Even the little eight year olds🥰😅! They were really cute.

Your welcome! Glad to do it. Oh sweet!! My little brother just turned 14. 🙁  I can’t imagine him letting me brush his teeth…😂😂

😊. Yes! Awwww. Yeah I don’t think he would love that &#x1f9…[Read more]

@wilder-w

Thank you so much!!!! You really didn’t have to do that! But awww, thanks. Will you tell me what you think after you read it?

You are so welcome!! I want to😊! Of course I will! I’m gonna buy it today sometime. I didn’t get a chance to yesterday 😩. I read the sneak peak on Amazon, and I’m loving it already! Bramble is just the cutest…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

You did a good job showing them back home! You think later you might switch to Layson and Maylee and Keiryn? Or back to Kaine and Everly? That was weird, I help like a part of me fell into the hole with them😂😭. I guess that shows how much I love your charries!! I think poor Matthew might have a…[Read more]

@wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @esther-c @any-one-else-i-might-have-forgotten-I’m-so-scatter-brained-X-D-

Aww! I love all of y’all’s charries!! 😊

Okay, so all of my charries Greatest Love so far are their siblings/family. But their fears are an assortment of different things.

Matthew

Greatest Love:

His sister, Lyla.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I mean in the second book one readers might think there’s one but it’s just…yea whatever

Ah yes, faking readers out is one of the best feelings, especially when they fall for it hard 🤣

@godlyfantasy12

yeah, I really like Grimm for some reason! Like idk why! He sounds so interesting, and his name seems very fitting.

Nyx having to talk to people he doesn’t trust out of need is a really interesting thing…

Aww he’s a sweetheart inside? I love that 😀!!

haha yes… pet peeve… lol I get it. And if I were an intelligent animal I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I get that! I haven’t read enough to have a stance on that, I just know that a lot of the books with the teenage crushes tend to be not ok, so I don’t read them. I actually really like the teenage crushes in books, but you have to be careful how it’s portrayed. I think people need to realize teenage crushes don’t have to have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oh I love that plot for your characters! Sounds awesome!

That actually is so similar to what I’m doing, but different too.

I love Nyx only being heard by those he trusts… does he trust Grimm? and I can’t imagine the frustration of trying to tell people your fox brother talks (or are people familiar with the species?) when only…[Read more]

@esther-c

Feel free to add whoever, it can get hard to keep track of with a lot. I think we each have two in right now. 🙂

@theloonyone @loopylin @kielah-h @lightoverdarkness6

Allow me to remove Kaine and Everly from the castle, its going to be awkward but we’ll just pretend it worked just fine….

Kaine

Kaine stares at Crosshair. He turns…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Honestly it’s sorta like what happens with Nyx, Grimm and Jocelyn in my book series, except you have a bit of leeway due to it being in comic form 😊

Oh yeah! I know a little bit about them… Nyx is a fox… right? And I might be getting this wrong, Jocelyn is his sister? And she and Grimm are together, right? Mind if I ask how a f…[Read more]