@starofthenorth
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Arien replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Btw, I love the pictures for Durwin and the twins! They’re twins, right? Oh, and yes, I think they look like twins. Not like super alike, but they look like they’re siblings. 😉
Okay, great! Thank you!
And I think you’re fine with Asher and Iris . . . unless @esther-c and @freedomwriter76 disagree, of course!
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Arien replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Really?! Whoa. It’s 48 degrees here, plus a wind chill.
Ooh, toasty. XD Yeah, it’s a little chilly here! But we’re used to it. 😊 And personally, I’ll take the cold over heat any day!
But on Christmas here it’s gonna be o degrees!!! It hasn’t been that cold here in 40 years, my mom told me!
Uffda! *throws you the coat @godlyfanta…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
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Felicity replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh, no 😨! You gotta warn me when I do need to worry about him 😭😨😅
Are you sure you’ll want me to? It might spoil it… 😉
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Arien replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
But it was great because our church youth group is known for having more girls the guys so they went there and came back like “THERE ARE ACTUALLY GUYS IN CHURCH XD”
LOL My problem is finding mature guys in church. They all seem so ridiculous or flirty and that drives. Me. Nuts. I am a kind of stubborn person and I hate being mani…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Haha! Yeah, I’m pretty sure brothers hate being called cute. Me and my mom just can’t help it though, bc they are so cute! Yeah, like older guys are handsome—in their early twenties and late teens. And cute is younger boys…and really shy boys. Sorry, I’ve got too much knowledge of that kinda stuff 🤣🤣.
I agree 🤣🤣 And hey, that…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 started the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Good evening to everybody! I am super excited to be here! Over the last couple years, writing has definitely taken the back burner but I am ready to get inspired to unearth my projects and share them with all of you! I really have never had anyone else read my writing besides my fam so this is exciting and scary. 😉 Please don’t be shy to share…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow, that Viking story sounds super cool! I’d love to read it if/when you decide to share!
Hmm…curious how that went. I personally dislike the word cute for describing guys. I don’t think they like it, basing that off of my brothers’ reactions…(they think it’s awful). 🤣 I like the word handsome way better….but then, I have next to no…
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Felicity replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
That was really hilarious!! Good job on this cheesy Christmas romance story!! 😂😂
I’m sure your grandparents will love it!
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Arien replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
I haven’t had any guys ask me if I had a boyfriend (how embarrassing! wow!) but there have been *counts* four (? or five?) guys who had crushes on me. Last week one bought me chocolate and I got really embarrassed *joins @starofthenorth under her blanket*
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Arien replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
That was adorable! And so funny 🤣🤣 When the candy cane fingerprint showed up, I was just like . . . seriously?!?! But it’s great. Cheesy, yeah, but that’s what you were going for. I hope your grandparents enjoy it!
I can’t think of any titles right now but I’ll let you know if I do!
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Light replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Ugh, I messed up your tag again! 😅
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Light replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Asher and Iris are so cute too! Maybe I just missed it, but are they friends or siblings?
Oh, they are siblings. Thank you!! I’ve been wondering if I should change their names tho, bc Freedom-writer has an Iris and Esther-c Has an Asher, and I don’t want them to think I copied them… Btw, I love the pictures for Durwin and the twins!…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
I think I figured it out too! Was it on the spoiler forum?
You got it!!
*rubs hands together*
Oh really, I’m not that excited . . . it’s just cold here. Totally just cold (0 degrees rn)
Really?! Whoa. It’s 48 degrees here, plus a wind chill. But on Christmas here it’s gonna be o degrees!!! It hasn’t been that cold here in 40 years, my mom…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow That was hilarious! I love it! I really felt the characters, even with it being a short story. And although cheesy, the romance was super cute!!
You could call it, “A Christmas dream”, but that’s a bit generic.
As far as writing goes, there isn’t really much I would change. If this were an actual story, I would say they should get…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Well…You do not have to confirm, nor deny, for I know who you speak of.
Lol, yeah, poor @felicity! I read a lot of the spoiler forum a while back, and I was just like “what?!?!?” when I read..that…about you know who 😂. But seriously, great plot twist tho! It caught me by surprise.
Should we tell her what page it is on the…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Woah, I just had an idea to make things more interesting. Let’s have resident castle villains! I propose just one or two at the start. So like guards of the castle anyone can use to make drama. if anyone wants them to be characters, make them whatever!
Let’s try to give them at least a motive though, not just mean…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok so it’s hard to keep track… but I think Milo (and Cammie?) are with the dragon rn too. (that right @theloonyone ?) Oh and feather and crosshair are there too.
Trying to help us stay organized with who is where, also because we have split the groups to make them easier to manage, maybe only tag the people your…[Read more]
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