Erica

@felicity

It was rather cheesy, but…we laughed. That’s all that matters, right? 😀 😀 Sweet!

Lol, yes, that’s all that matters! Speaking of sibling laughs, my little brother is always talking about how many books I read, and he was singing the song from Tangled, the part where Repunzel’s singing “And then I’ll read a book, or maybe two or three.” B…[Read more]

Lydia

James

Joel

Here is a picture of Jessica.

@esther-c

So, I noticed that the kids are going to school. But it’s Christmastime. So that would be weird if they were going to school that close to Christmas Day.

Wow. I don’t know how I missed that….thanks for pointing it out. *thumbs up*

I suggest reading it aloud

I’ll try that. I do a lot of dialogue in my writing as you will see and so m…[Read more]

@felicity

Wait, are you sure he wasn’t teasing you? 🤣 It was pretty obvious to me!

Oh, no, I know when he’s teasing, and he wasn’t teasing 🤣. Okay, good!! 😂

@esther-c

Took me a while to reply, but now I am! 😁

Yay! Thank you for taking the time to respond 😊!

First of all, I could really feel the sibling dynamic! Great job on that! Sibling dynam…

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@arien

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn

Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Also, were you sure of their genders? My uncle read it yesterday, and he goes, “I like that. Asher and Iris are both girls, right?” 🤣 I was like “umm no.” I was pretty sure Asher is just a boy name, but I could be wrong 🤣.

Wait, are you sure he wasn’t teasing you? 🤣 It was pretty obvious to me!

@lightoverdarkness6

Omg, that’s hilarious!!! I love it!! That sounds like something me and my cousin would do (We’re like sisters)!

It was rather cheesy, but…we laughed. That’s all that matters, right? 😀 😀 Sweet!

That’s okay! Haha, I’m not great at solving mysteries XD. I don’t know when I would’ve figured it out 🤣. (if I ever did XD!)

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@lightoverdarkness6

YES WAY!!!! XD Yes, It is!! Lol, yeah! Well, how can you not? They’re cute, sweet, and have great voices! XD That’s cool too!!

XD XD XD

@felicity

*clears throat* Yeah it’s true.

Um, we were having a bit of a joke. We were in the same room, both on KP, and when she said in her intro, “I’m a baby barista”, I put, “hey, my sister works at a coffee shop too!” and…well, we lost it.

Omg, that’s hilarious!!! I love it!! That sounds like something me and my cousin would do (We’re like s…[Read more]

@arien

One thing about writing style: sometimes using more descriptive words for “said” can be distracting and sound contrived.

Yeah, I use said too much. I’ve actually started having my grandma’s I-Pad next to me while I write, and the I-Pad has a list of words to use other than “Said.”

I know, it can be hard not to use “said” all the time, b…

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@folith-feolin

Ok, I see. I’m Harry Potter ignorant. Thanks for explaining. 😀

@whalekeeper

I think it’s awesome that your dad let you research and determine that it wasn’t the right thing for you 😊 I guess you could say it’s a combination of things for you, and if it’s not your thing on a preference level, that’s cool.

Yes, definitely a combo for me. 😀 I don’t read much fantasy except LOTR and Chronicles of Narnia. H…[Read more]

@felicity

heh…why am I always on my laptop when you look up?

*pauses, looks up, scratches head, looks back at laptop*

*grins*

@folith-feolin

Just be glad you aren’t fixing a car where I live. (unless you have a heated garage) It’s -26 degrees right now.

That’s a neat name idea!

@keilah-h

My brother likes ravens and crows because they’re really smart.

Did you or your brother ever read Jean Craighead George’s book Charlie’s Raven? I LOVE that book and it actually was an inspiration for my book.