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Felicity replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Jon slipped his hand to his side and felt the cool bone handle of his knife. He kept his eyes on the raging creature.
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Felicity replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
LOL that response was perfect 😂
Wow Nyx just isn’t getting the tea to spill today huh? 😂🤣
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Just for fun: charrie edition in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
This is such a fun idea!!! Hi and nice to meet you! *fist bump*
1. Ring-bearer (this is you): which race would you be? Elf, dwarf, human, or hobbit?
I’d be an ELF…with long braided hair, maybe greenish brown eyes, and a bow….:) 🙂 As you can see from my forum name, Orielle, I love elves. 😉
For the rest of the Characters, I am…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Yes, Nyx is such a brat. And He’ll be more specific this time 😂
Also November asking favorite book? So cute XD
Yay! Glad your joining us! 😀
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Felicity replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Nyx is such a brat sometimes 😂
I know right? But it’s….FUN!!!
But he’s really the only character I can write like that because all the others have such big hearts they don’t wann embarrass anyone XD tho Lyn probably would (but she’d mostly do it to get ppl together XD)
Yeah, Lyn is hilarious!!!!
Jonathan chuckled. “You are v…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
I really enjoyed the read! I would change how you do the inner dialogue a bit, but that’s just my opinion.
‘Someday,’ I thought, ‘ this place will fill with people too. But it seems so long in coming.’ Back in Greensburgh there were visits to be made, parties to attend, and meetings to commence.
Because it’s first person, thought…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Sorry!!!! I had to go down for supper.
Jonathan stared at Nyx keenly. “Truth.”
(Haha! A war between Nyx and Jon!!! 😀 ;D)
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
I would say maybe break up the story Annie tells into smaller paragraphs. And possibly note exactly where the visitors are from.
Good points.
And maybe construct Nellie a little more. As in, what is the motive for her bossiness? Will it cause strife later? Does she have a nice side?
After reading my story over again, I did think…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks for the response! Yes, I agree with you that Pa does seem to just assume the Grants are new pioneers….appreciate you pointing that out.
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
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Next Post…..Part Two of the Annie Adams story. Enjoy. Or ignore.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic incorrect quotes in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@joy-caroline @arien @sarafini @esther-c @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin
Okay, so as soon as I saw this, I loved it, and found an incorrect quote generator and made some!! Heres one.
Dylan: *Kicks the door down looking panicked*
Iris: What did you do?
Dylan: Nobody died.
Iris: WHAT KIND OF ANSWER IS THAT?!Dylan: Who thinks I can fit 15…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Heya! Here I am. in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hello! Welcome back!
I’m Felicity, an aspiring authoress, homesteader and follower of Jesus. I write Historical and Contemporary fiction. Justice and righteousness are great themes! My favorite theme to write is Good overcoming Evil.
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Felicity replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Good idea about making a list of all the characters!
Here’s mine:
Lana and Henry Drachensted (sis and bro)
Jon and Malcolm Renesvaire (cousins)
Ernesto and Adele Drachensted (married)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I’m on now!
And November’s talk about Ara was thee sweetest thing ever 😭 he simply adores her XDXD sooo cute!!!! And he went overtime LOL
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Felicity replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Uh oh, what’s Nyx going to do to Jon? 😀
POOR NOVEMBER!!!
That was a good one and really fun to read!!
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Light replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh, I love those moodboards!! Great job!! 🙂
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Light replied to the topic Heya! Here I am. in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Hello!! Haha, welcome back! I’m LightoverDarkness, but on here most people call me Light. 😉 I’m a piano playing, drawing, animal loving, Jesus loving, homeschooled, teen writer! It’s very nice to meet you!
Okay! Now for some newbie questions!
1. Which of your characters are most like you?
2. What’s your favorite snack…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
no but give my girl a bit of slack because she is thinking “awww that was so sweet whoever it is is Soooo lucky!!!” and she doesn’t know it’s her XD
Awww, lol!
also u can have ur charries react if u like and I can ask one of ur charries a truth or dare (FINALLY GET TO ASK MATTHEW MAYBE?! XD)
Oh, for sure!! Sometime after you ask…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Truth or Dare- For Our Charries?! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
I was actually watching Back to the Future last night. Lol Which is the only reason I picked that. Alec seems like the kind of person who would like that song.
Lolol!! Haha, that was a fun one. I like Alec!
Lol it was sardines XD I hate the smell of those, and I don’t believe I’ve ever eaten one.
Oh, I loath sar…[Read more]
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