Erica

@esther-c

I’m a crazy imaginative person….and something I’ve found that helps me write transition/description is picturing the scene in my mind. Then I choose one or two things about the scene that make is unique and focus on those.

For instance, if I’m describing a park, I’ll point out the bright orange swing set, or the tens of squirrels…[Read more]

@power

Oh no. I hope I’m not the only contestant! 🙁

@godlyfantasy12

Oof, sorry!! I went to bed really early last night, so I’m just now seeing this.

Asher

“Not at all,” Ara said. She looked around and asked, “Are you alone?”

I frowned slightly, biting my lip before speaking. “I…well…not exactly…my…my…” I trailed off.

My what? He’s…not that…no…he doesn’t think of me as that…

Ara no…[Read more]

Nice!!

Have you heard Lauren Daigles song “look up child”? It’s really good!! I can’t remember the lyrics distinctly, but she’s a Christian artist.

@esther-c

Ahh GIRL!!! Oh my goodness I LOVE IT!!!! I needed to hear (read??) that :). I don’t think that it’s too short, but, by all means, if you want to, I’d love to see the last line!!

@esther-c

Oh I read them! I’m interested to know where this is going!

Pls take the following with a very large grain of salt, it’s just thoughts and I have no idea where the series is going. You as the author knows best 😀 !!

It felt a little rushed how everything happened, but I mean it is only a first draft. In the scene with Ami and Ev…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @any-one-else

Dylan

The young man moaned, grimacing.

I frowned and touched his shoulder again. “Hey…”

He jerked slightly at my touch, then tried to push himself up from the floor. He lost any strength that he had and, before I could catch him, face-planted back into the floor .

Oh wow…that’s gotta…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ah yeah maybe!!

@esther-c

Ooh interesting!

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you for the link of the video!! I’ll check it out 🙂

@esther-c

Ikr? Lol

Villains are hard. Because it’s difficult to create their motive and personality without making it cliche.

Yesss!!! It so is. I’ve been reading a lot of articles about writing one tho, so hopefully I’m improving. 🙂

@GODLYFANTASY12

OMG!!!! YESSS!!!! Ahhh that would be PURE GOLD!!!!

And seriously, I just went to my first ever dance last night!! It was so fun!!

Lol a boy that I danced with really reminded me of how Matthew would be at a dance XDXD. He stood in the corner for a while and looked super awkward and out of place, poor thing. If we do that,…[Read more]

@esther-c

oh good question!

if it’s a large transition in location, I would put it in between chapters. then you dont have to say, “they arrived at the park” you would just start off the chapter with “Ami looked around at the park (describe lighting/colors)”

I recently realized how important lighting is in descriptions. I think I realized this…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise @esther-c @freedomwriter

anyone here to chat while i wait for my nails to dry? Goodness this is boring. XD

@keilah-h

Thanks! I guess i’m just picky lol

@godlyfantasy12

lol that would be fun!!

@princesachronicle22

Aww thank you!! Ugh Ikr!? He is XDXD!

I’m leaving early to go to the church dance, so I probably won’t be able to RP until late tonight or tomorrow. See you at the dance!! 😀

@godyfantasy12

OMG that is all of my charries!! Aww thank you for sharing! All of my characters are Calvin and the other girl that thinks that she’s not good enough at the beginning of my book, and then by the end they’re the other two teens (lol now I really want to watch it now!

@godlyfantasy12

Sure! I’ll try to finish it before I leave. I’m going to go on a walk with my family, so I’ll be back in a few minutes.

@lightoverdarkness6

Here’s a link to the day one course, the rest are there somewhere:

He doesn’t show how to hold a guitar or pick, so I had to look at separate videos for that.

@loopylin

What about these:

Aohito (Japanese for blue)

Glaukon- (Greek for blueish grey)

Nilam- (Sanskrit for dark blue)

Zircon

Liko- (Hawaiian for green)

@orielle21

I forgot how much I liked this. 😉

@godlyfantasy12

I know. Little brothers, right? Gotta love ’em. 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Neato! (now I want to hear you speak it 😉 )