@starofthenorth
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you so much for making this! XD
I have a couple instances of bad parents in my story, but also some good ones.
I’ve noticed the exact same thing in books for ya these days. It’s pretty tempting to go that way because it’s really hard to give characters actually moral flaws, because we love them and want them to be perfect!…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
What would ya’ll think of the title, “Afterthoughts of a broken heart”? for my second book? It’s almost a little bit cringe but it sounds much better than afterthoughts of a releaseor.
@freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 (If you’re not back yet that’s fine! 🙂 take your time!)
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I don’t really have time for this right now so…
I realized I want my time on this forum to stay more writing related, so I’m just going to leave the discussion where it is.
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Felicity replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@anyone
Anyone read any books by Joel Rosenburg? He writes Adult Thriller novels about Iran taking over the U.S…stuff like that. It’s Christian, and pretty clean (there’s violence though) although I can’t speak for all of them.
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Felicity replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Thank you, thank you for coming out and being brave enough to speak about your beliefs. This is a good thing, and you were very respectful and gracious. I personally agree with you and I really appreciate the way you talked about emotion and drama. This is so true.
I have always been hesitant to write about abusive parents/broken…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh poor November 😭😭 that was so good and sad, I can only imagine the reaction his dad is going to have 😭😥😥
(Pls tell November he’s absolutely lovely and he should ignore anyone who tells him otherwise?)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks, glad you like them!
Yeah Layson is basically just idk what I’m doing but I love her so we’ll figure it out 😭
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
(I’m just making it that Layson is the one your charrie heard groan)
Layson scoops Maylee up into his arms as smoke fills the room.
“In my eyes!” Maylee squeals, rubbing one of her eyes with her hand. Layson looks around, trying to find an exit. He takes off in the opposite direction, more concerned with Maylee getting smoke…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Wow that was so good!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
So glad you’re feeling better! Go ahead and share them!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Aesthetics, anyone? ✨ in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
I see you already have some here, so it’s ok if it takes you a long time to get around to it. We know you’re busy!
Oh… let’s go for one from my short story.
Archie!
Color Aesthetics (colors you want)
Fiery colors lol!
Dark green, dark metallic, lots of grey. Dead tree kinda aesthetic lol.
A few items/belongings important…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I’ve really been struggling to write recently, and I know some of its just pure laziness/procrastination, but I think some of it is also just feeling like my writing has taken a downturn and isn’t as good as it was??
Maybe that’s just me thinking that, but I just don’t feel it’s very great…even though I want it to be and it’s…
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Felicity replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Thats fine! My life is pretty busy right now too. 🙂
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
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Felicity replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Are we going to set a date/time?
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Felicity replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Sweet! <3 Everdala. 🙂
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@princesachonicle22
Yeah he needs a break from Serin Stabby Stick
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Sure! Ik I haven’t been rping a lot recently but however we break it up it would be nice if my oc’s could end up with some new people lol, I don’t think Layson meshes very well with Dante and Serin 🤣
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @whalekeeper
Thanks yall! <<3
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I like it, but it reminds me more of a romance novel than a dystopian, but that’s just my opinion.
Afterthoughts of Regret
Afterthoughts of the Shattered (this one’s kinda vague but could also refer to being broken emotionally)
I do like Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, though. =)
@freedomwriter76
ok, thanks! <3
@gwyndalf-the-wise
XDXD it is basically a romance. It's dystopian, but most of the entire plot is about Layson trying to find a wife. It follows him on a really long journey as a releasor, but it's established early in the series having a family is his most important goal.
<3
XD Nice! Than I vote definitely keep Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, it fits!