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@freedomwriter76

Awesome XD I’ll definitely be on here.

@fernweh_grace

Hi Kathyrn, welcome to Kingdom Pen!

I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, a Christian homeschooled teenager, violinist, and writer. I mostly write science fiction or dystopian ideas, and I love Andrew Peterson and instrumental music as well!

That’s awesome! How long have you lived in Africa? I really like geography and learning other…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @acancello

Thank you so much! She’s my favorite character <3

@freedomwriter76

Girl why???!!!!!

I mean yes I have a few charries who don’t get redeemed but you don’t have to be the same way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I mean it’s your book, but now I’m sad 😔

@freedomwriter76

Important question!!!

Does Hans get redeemed before he dies…??

Also whenever I read about Hans, I always think of the prince in Frozen XD

@trailblazer

I don’t think it’s too summary-y, lol. It fits the style so far very well! I would’ve maybe liked to see the scene with Libbie hanging out with Sara, Lillian, and Etta in a non-summary kind of style, but if they’re not major characters, I think this works best. Great job so far, I’m really enjoying it! 😁

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

This next section I’m gonna post is one that needs a little more fleshing out as well. It’s short, and you’ll be able to see it feels more like a summary than really telling the story. If you have any ideas of scenarios I could fit in here or things you think should happen with the characters, let me know!

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@savannah_grace2009

I love that one! It captures her personality really well. Mine never turn out that good, lol!

@trailblazer

Looks good! 😁 aw, poor Albert!

@savannah_grace2009 Thanks! I will definitely check that out!

@freedomwriter76 @acancello @highscribeofaetherium

this is my favorite moodboard I’ve ever done. I’m new to this, but I love this one! She’s one of my MC’s.

@trailblazer

Yeah, for sure! If you want to develop characters more, character questionaires have really helped me. Here’s one I found and have used: https://www.novel-software.com/character-questionnaire/

I love everyone’s personality and how the older brothers want to protect their little sisters. It’s so sweet!

@freedomwriter76

thanks for the tips!

@mineralizedwritings

Awww I’m sorry! I hope things get better!

@savannah_grace2009

One thing I like about these scenes is that it gives a little more of a glimpse of Libbie’s relationship with her brother Abe. I feel like he’s not a very well developed character in the story, but I want to find a way to change that.

@light-warrior-pen

thank you! I love Sef and Lilitu, they are SO CUTE <3

@trailblazer

I hate misunderstandings with teachers! That’s the worst! I feel so bad for Albert 🙁 and I’m so happy they protected Libbie and Etta!