Brianne

@princesachronicle22 @loopylin

Also, Kid doesn’t wear the traditional full body Realn armor, instead he wears only a breastplate backplate, and gauntlets. He sometimes wears a face mask over his nose and mouth. He has a hoodie type thing he wears under his armor, and jeans. He also wears leather lace up steel toed boots, cuz why not?

His choice…[Read more]

@loopylin

It’s fine. I am usually the same!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

You guys really escalated the problem. Oh boy, here we go…

Nahim

Nahim punched Zahlin in the stomach, a little to the side and up at an angle, a trick he had accidentally (unfortunately for his older brother) learned many years ago to put pressure on the diaphragm. Zahlin brought his sword down on Nahim, but it…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Awww thanks!

@highscribeofaetherium

Sorry, when I posted that I hadn’t seen your post. Woops.

And I don’t think all three of them at once would make a lot of sense since they don’t know each other or anything

@calyhuge

Okay sorry XD Um… yeah I could see Marek and Eleanor getting into a fight, but like Loopy they would have to be tempted a lot

But Eleanor would have to be tempted less, Marek you’d have to punch him or hurt somebody else before he’ll get involved

Eleanor it would have to be hurting someone else or trying to touch her in a violent…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok, awesome. Thanks. 👍

@anyone interested

I have Marek’s first scene (he’ll most likely not start the book but this is like his first POV)

and it also is pretty rough (but it’s the first draft and I’m trying to not edit too much)

Bullets, bombings, and the very soldiers who had helped him were lying pale on the ground next to him. 

Marek had never felt so very…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr @rae @anyone-else-that-I-missed

Ok, so I really want to RP for Amir or Hedieh today, but it looks like a lot has happened. 😂 Can someone catch me up on what’s going on? All I know is that they were transported to a different world and a queen wants them to f…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oooh yeah! I like that! I hadn’t noticed that issue before, but that does make sense. And it also really shows how much the brothers really love each other. (I don’t know what you’re planning to do with this story, but it’s also could be a point of conflict among the brothers because some might want to leave and others want to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*Me having no clue who this guy is yet crying anyway* I love it!!!

@freedomwriter76

excuse me as I go cry again for Marek, that’s so good!!!! And I kind of wrote something similar

because I was thinking that Marek would make friends with Pierre (a younger French soldier, who we really don’t see) and then when Marek gets to France he has to be the one to tell Pierre family what happened and it’s kind of just…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

(also, may be unnecessary info, but Jakob is also the tallest of the Bois, standing at 6’4″ XD legit a giant😂)

Well tall guys are the best so XD

(i can totally go more in-depth about the others too if you wanted…🤭XD)

Yessssss please do!!!!!!

Have you possibly considered showing what Marek did/went through by showing it throu…

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@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @rae

*me in the background watching from the shadows*

FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT!

@jonas

Yeah, sorry, i was too lazy to check XD

Actually, a duel might be fun…I’m rethinking. What do you think?

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

“I want you to think very carefully about your next moves. I don’t want to have to kill you both.” Ellis through his word over his head, which nahim thought a little pointless. He heard another voice say this was going to be fun, but he ignored it, keeping his yes of the sword waved in front of him.

“You think your…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Hi Elizabeth, welcome to Kingdom Pen!!

I’m hybridlore on here, a homeschooled high schooler, sci-fi/dystopian writer, violinist, and follower of Jesus. It’s nice to meet you!

I didn’t read everyone’s questions, so if I give you the same one, don’t worry about answering it.

What are your favorite books/series?

What’s the plot of…[Read more]

@acancello

Nice job!

@trailblazer

Sorry I never got back to you on that! I would post about the things you like, what You’ve been doing lately, or things you’ve learned recently. Everyone has their own interests so a lot of what I like might no seem interesting to you.

@euodia-vision @trailblaze

Y’all could always talk about books you’ve been…[Read more]