Brianne

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-really-(:

Some of my own memes 🤭 (sry if they’re blurry 😬)

@freedomwriter76

Oh my goodness, that worst writer one is one of my favorites. 😂

@freedomwriter76

Okay…. hmmm I’ll do Eliana and Marek  (just to stay on the WWII theme and also I need to figure out their relationship, like how they act)

and it will probably be pretty early into their dating relationship

If you would like to start because… I’m pretty terrible at starting these things XD

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, I remember the old group but we can start a new one since I had old characters in it I’d rather forget…

I don’t what characters to do

do you want to do fanfic characters or ones from our novels (I have no preference)

@grcr

Although another theme is to simply avoid making deals with the devil😅

@freedomwriter76

You’re cruel to the poor boy

XD

@freedomwriter76

I know!! they’re amazing and they fit so well

but tightrope makes me cry

@grcr

The moral is hypocrisy. To do evil on someone means that you yourself have done evil, regardless of what name you have committed it under.

@jonas

So this is essentially a Naln and Szeth character. I like how you added the Unspace sword you talked about earlier, and the price of hypocrisy was a good ending and theme. Great job!

@whalekeeper

Those memes were amazing!!

@freedomwriter76

wait… doesn’t Loki have ice powers, Skylar does but I can’t remember if Loki doe

Skylar

He glanced around at all of the shops and noticed a small yet elegant store with dresses and suits in the window; he pointed at it and smiled at Skylar. “How about we try that store first?”

Skylar looked at the store, she saw a whole row…[Read more]

And Michael

@jonas

 I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.

Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.

Jade

And I have boards

Falon!!

Lolol

@euodia-vision @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

I have chapter 2!! (and this one has my favorite couple in it…)

Chapter 2

“The movie made literally no sense,” Pietro stated, he was currently at a restaurant with Hannah. They had just gotten back from the movies where they were playing “classics”.

“It’s supposed to be romantic…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I think it…[Read more]

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?

Also, is there anything I could improve on?

(Am I changing things too much?)

Chapter 1

The world is a dark…[Read more]