Brianne

@ellette-giselle

I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.

I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?

@whalekeeper

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

@ellette-giselle

It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.

I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

@ellette-giselle

It worked!

I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.

Great job!

@ellette-giselle

They’re not showing up on the link for me.

@liberty

Gotcha.

@savannah_grace2009 Have fun!! 😁

@liberty

I definitely got that difference, but having you explain it helped even more.

Is Jace younger than the others? You described him as a boy multiple times.

Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol.

I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.

And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.

@savannah_grace2009

❤️❤️❤️

@jonas

I have a bunch of trips that I’ll be gone for, but you can start without me!!! I’m just not sure how available I’ll be until my schedule frees up in July. And I’m sure I can pop on every now and then in between being gone lol

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD

Yes please do!

@hybridlore

<3

I don’t go to camp until this afternoon so I’m really excited and nervous!!!!!!

@esther-c

Aw girl you’re the best <3

@whalekeeper

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

Oh girl I’m so sorry *hugs* I don’t know exactly what you’re going through but I do know that  cancer is horrible and sucks to deal with…if YOU need to talk to someone who (to some degree at least) un…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay that’s a cool character arc then!!

I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD

And I’m glad that Hallie’s talking to God again <33 even if it’s slow progress

@theducktator

I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.

Oh goodness! that’s ridiculous 😂

Some of the material will depend on state and my driver’s ed program said that there were a lot of road sign questions and you c…

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@theducktator

I do all the time and randomly remember during the day. XD

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIjmMlC28TT3c9eMUpg1-9ASZ71vtWpJMhcSz_dmI_Y/edit?usp=drivesdk

I’ll send the Word link to your email, if you want that one too.

@keilah-h

don’t all eyes have blood in them though?

True, just his are completely red in the sclera

Guy with eyes that look like they have blood in them tries to get revenge on humanoid spider.

@theshadow @theducktator @savannah_grace2009

Sorry for falling off the face of the planet there for a minute! XD Anyway, thank you so much for your feedback and I’ve read through it all and am FOR SURE taking every word into consideration (I just don’t feel like making individual replies to each one. I know. I’m lazy 🤣)

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