Brianne

@highscribeofaetherium

I’m right there with Sara… I was laughing so hard!  Mr. Mwahahaha and the plunger gun… LOL!

@freedomwriter76

Wanda!!! And Pietro, he’s trying so hard to be a good twin!!!

I love it, and Loki’s amazing!!

Also I had an idea for Pietro… and Wanda too (U always have ideas, but feel free to completely ignore this idea)

So uhhhhh you mentioned earlier that Pietro has stolen food and stuff, so what if Pietro stole like an item of a value…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, I’ve read both as well. The sleepless have been really interesting to learn about. And the Dawnshard was really intriguing, and having the background from what you’ve talked about before really helped.

@jonas

So I’ve been really bad at following up on this thread for quite a while now, as well as KP in general lately. I’ve sort of skimmed through, but you’ve probably done a lot since you last posted. Is there still anything specific you would like my thoughts on still?

@mineralizedwritings

I liked those! My favorite part was probably the worldbuilding and seeing how the fairy tales tied in to the series. You’re right though, there was a lot of romance. 😑

@esther-c

Heyy, I got it! XD That’s actually really funny and clever.

@esther-c

That is so interesting! I love the arcs, they sound really realistic. It’s kind of cool that Ami’s, Ev’s, and the villain’s main desire is for control.

@freedomwriter76

I know right?! XD

yeah, I kind of figured he had some control but still like… I never thought of it that way! LOL

@hybridlore

Yeah it is, actually. 😂 I didn’t want to write about someone getting married so I chose adoption instead. XDD

@esther-c Lol! For a moment I thought that first one might be based off of Esther from the Bible. It’s not, right?

Oh and for those of you wondering, Ami’s type 2.

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @anyone-else

Sooo… I was working on some “character-building” the past day or so, and I’ve fixed my MCs’ character arcs/internal conflicts to tie into the theme more and so I can write them better/more accurately. (With a l…[Read more]

@smiley

Ack! Sorry I’m late, but I finally found time to read this. M’kay…

So the one big thing that I noticed was a lot of telling and info-dumping. I could handle the information, but it’s not always enjoyable to read a bunch of backstory. Stuff like that should be sprinkled throughout. Besides that, there were a few places where things…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Of course! (:

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @anyone

Ok, so I have bad writing, but my worst writing I deleted years ago!!! 😭 There was three chapters of a book I wrote on my parents computer when I was like 7, I tried to start a few books when I was 9/10/11, I had an almost completed book around 11, but I still have a book I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think so! You can go ahead and RP first if you want. 🙃

@savannah_grace2009

XD Yeah, I could see that!

@hybridlore

Aww it’s cute! I actually like it! For some reason it reminds me of “A Series of Unfortunate Events” books. Idk why XD

@highscribeofaetherium

I was laughing so hard!!! The plunger gun…ahhh that was great! hahaha!

Mr Mwahaha…that’s hilarious!!