Brianne

@acancello

Okay, got it. So it harvests energy from the sun (maybe because it’s slightly close to the sun than the earth is?).

@jonas

Oh, I guess I misunderstood your question because thats exactly what happens, it overloads the power stations and destroy it that way. 🙂

@loopylin @rae

I like those, thanks!!

@freedomwriter76

Behind the moonlit walls…. I like that… 😀

@highscribeofaetherium @grcr

Thats ok, I’m still thinking of a name after 2 years…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Hey! Do you wanna RP next for our group?

(I almost forgot about this. XD) But I totally understand if you’re busy. 😊

Here was the last RP:

Adrian

“Germany,” Esther explained. “Although I have lived in America for the past several years…what of both of you?”

“Aletheia,” Ev answered for the both of them.

Adrian wasn’t paying a…

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@acancello

Sooo… I don’t have a specific title idea, but just a suggestion.

I don’t know if you’ve figured out what C.H.I.M.E. stands for yet, but the words in the title could each start with the letters from that word. It’d be one of those things where readers eventually notice and freak out. “Like WhAt?!?!?” (At least that’s what I would do…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

See this is the problem with marvel, they spend to much time on the action scenes and not answering the real questions

like was Bucky’s family the owners of Barnes and Noble?????!!!!

XD

yeah that would make sense

…Steve was probably one of the ones labeled as one that needed to be eradicated or at least s…

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@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

Fynn chuckled awkwardly, the warmth on his cheeks feeling out of place. He willed it away and looked up at Liv. “I guess I just don’t understand how Callie’s mind works all the time. How do I know what I say will make her happy or… unhappy?” He caught Callie’s gaze as they passed each other again and she gave him a warm…[Read more]

• Pietro almost looks up to Steve as if he was an older brother

My heart!!

I love that one so much

@freedomwriter76

I needed that!!! (I’m working on a fanfiction and I’ve been struggling on what to write)

but like seriously those are amazing!!

also I just saw this thing on Pinterest and oh my gosh girl I’m dying

someone pointed out how the Barnes must have been rich, cause for one in Steve’s flashback, we see him in an old worn out suit…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks. 😊

@esther-c

It’s totally fine! I understand, life gets busy! 🙂 No rush!

@acancello

So, where does the moon get the energy from? And why wouldn’t it just be like, a satellite or something? What’s special about a moon?

I’m thinking maybe something with Lunar in the title? Lunar Overload..?

I kinda think Eclipse would be interesting, because it references the moon and basically, they’re having an electricity…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I’ve seen it, but I’ve been busy lately and haven’t gotten to it yet. 😅 I’ll try my best to get the next RP written today. 🙃 (And I still haven’t read your WIP yet. 😭 I’m so sorryyy. I’mma do that today too.)

@walkbyfaith @grcr

Those are good points! I’m using the You version app, but I might check out the Bible project app! I don’t really have too much to add, but I enjoyed reading what you guys thought!

@freedomwriter76

That song!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

And that scene😢😢😢😢 poor Leon!!!

Hmmm…One of my favorite parts about writing is naming the book and it’s chapters, cuz it’s usually easy XD

• C.H.I.M.E. (I know, kinda obvious, but your story seems to mention it a lot)

My brain is not responding rn, so I’ll come back to this, but I honestly like using the name of your organization. It’s a neat acronym, and easy to remember.

@esther-c

In case you haven’t seen the RP yet…I RP’d Liv’s response to Fynn’s awkward question, lol

@acancello

So…what exactly is C.H.I.M.E.? Like why are they taking people? (I understand if you can’t tell me…but one, I really have wanted to know ever since you told me about your book, and two…it might help me help you with the title!)

@jonas

Would it make more sense for there to be a huge demand for power? Below is a piece of an artical I found that explains. Thanks for asking because I came up with idea… 3 years ago? And there are a ton of plot holes XD  Hopefully this answers your question!

Whenever there is an overall demand for electrical energy that surpasses the…

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@freedomwriter76

Oh, thats sad😭  But Aaaah! Your descriptions!!😍 5k is really good!

I’m not pushing myself to hard, I tend to be very motivated 😂 (Says me who spends more time on Pintrest than editing) And so far I haven’t been stressed because I dont really have a deadline, I’d just like to get it done by then and if it dosent work out, Oh…[Read more]