Sara Ann {Spark}

@mineralizedwritings also!!! I’m so happy u like my charries!!

I don’t want it to be weird but I really love their relationship and think it’s super sweet. I know a lot of people and the world can twist things into just weird stuff and everything but idk I just find it real sweet and I like it and think it’s fine and innocent and just so sweet h…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings 🤣 sounds hilarious! Poor Layson but he sounds like the kinda funny guy I’d LOVE! Also he’s taking care of a little toddler? Yes please!!! Already love him! And Kaine!

Also, Grimm is the MC that is introduced in book 3, and they meet him while traveling after leaving Cirque (Lyn and Nyx’s home.)

He’s been through…[Read more]

@moneralizedwritings also the Practice makes perfect sounds hilarious 🤣 not sure why he’d be crying but maybe make it a comedic crying cuz imagining him mortified after that is hilarious 🤣

@mineralizedwritings

Of course! And yes I got it right, tho in the actual series (u may be thinking of the AUs) Grimm and Lyn’s relationship grows overtime.

So they aren’t obviously blood siblings, but Nyx was given to Jocelyn as a kit, the only one discovered of his kind by a man named Lander (who secretly has a large impact on Lyn’s life…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Okay, gotcha didn’t realize it was a comic but that’s super cool!

So with that awkward scene…I think if you make it a comedic scene since it’s a comic it would work out a bit better, and then perhaps later have Everly realize “Ah wait a minute this guys actually different then what I originally thought” meanwhile Layson’s on…[Read more]

Also, how old is Layson and Everly?

do they get married in this book? If not, then u can play with time and leave the readers with their own thoughts on what happens after the story “ends.”

In truth, showing their relationship developing isn’t all that hard. It’s mainly a point of not rushing them into things, just as we wouldn’t want to h…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

hmm…

Are Layson and Everly pov characters?

@felicity ah yes. You cannot flirt to convert, something my father and grandfather (also the pastor and bishop of our church) preaches.

Again, plz share ur specific issues with ur subplots, etc so we can help u out as best we can!

@mineralizedwritings I just responded to it lol!!

Ill probs talk about him in that

@felicity imo, I wouldn’t trade Christian value for historical accuracy.

The way I see it, people won’t notice if language isn’t there, but they will notice if it is.

make sense?

@mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper

Ahh….romance *sighs dreamily and falls onto a large bed XD*

How about we make a forum topic for romance subplots? If y’all want to?

As for Paxton….

IKR?! Quite honestly idk. I just have a thing for adorable little boys and had to have one in my series. Plus it does make the things he go thru…a lot wor…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings XD XD so that begs me to ask…

Have u met my Charrie Arthur? Lol he’s a Charrie from the second series idea I’ve got. He’s kinda like Shawn

@esther-c AHHH THANK U FOR DOING LUKAS! *hugs baby tight* THE BABY!!! I love him XD

@mineralizedwritings

But…those are beeeeeest XD XD XD jk I getcha, but I think he’s sincere, he kinda showed that side of himself in the one part of this scene. It’s moments like those where ur kike “ahh he does have that side to him”

now if a character never did that it would be a bit different….

@wilder-w AHHH I LOVE IT!!! Your writing is so good!! The part with the trees was amazing!!! So descriptive!!! Agh!! Oh man Shawn and Fenex….yessss!

Awww were some of the surrogate moms mean? I have a feeling they were. How rude! Shawn would make such a good dad, I already know XD

Also @esther-c luv that random percentage 🤣

most the time when I think of a new book to write or story idea it’s got a 99.9999999999% chance of becoming a series XD XD XD

@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6

ok…this is totally ur book Light (imma call u that if ya don’t mind)

BUT UMM THE SECOND IDEA ESTHER HAD ABOUT THE BULLIES?! I AM SO IN IF U DECIDE TO GO THAT ROUTE 🤣 like whaaaat?!

@felicity IKR!!! I need mooore lol