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@freedomwriter76

XD

Yep, we know you love Riker. I mean how could you not?! 🤩

@freedomwriter76 ❤️❤️❤️ @godlyfantasy12 Uh, I don’t know if i have time, I’m about to go to a church activity, but i’ll try to do it sometime tonight! Is it okay if I do a short time skip to where they’re planning? And also, do you want to bring your villain/antagonist (I can’t remember his name 😭) into this group…

@freedomwriter76

Oh ok that makes since. 😭😭yes not as much as Reuben, (🥰💗🤩🥺✨✨) but I love all the bois!

@whalekeeper

That was really good!

Btw, you have a Tauren too?! XD the name jumped out to me in there of course

@godlyfantasy12

Oh I see it’s a little safer if they stay?

@freedomwriter76

Poor boi! I love him so much! XD Is he not old enough to move out, or lacks the self confidence to do so? Because pls get him out of there 😭 and a guitar? Dude, instruments can hold so much sentimental value ;(

@lightoverdarkness6

I am SO, SOO sorry it took me so long to respond!! My responce got deleted idk how many times and I ended up yelling at the computer “Wait…Error?! Of COURSE I wanted to do that! Why would I have pressed submit if I didn’t?!” XD

But, again, I’m so sorry! 😭😭 I hope you’ve been doing well!

Do NOT worry about it, girl! Ackkk, tech…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Oooooh, okay! 😁 That makes sense now. Thanks so much!

@joy-calle

Characters with opposite personalities are so fun to write!!

Those two sound awesome! 😄

@esther-c

Thanks!

@acancello

Cool idea!!

I’ll have to hop on here later and post something. 😀

@kyronthearcanin

I recently had to do a string-along story in school. Basically, the title is one word, then from there the sentences grow in length.

I just did one too!! Mine was so much shorter. XD It’s impressive that you made it that long! Great job!! 😄

@freedomwriter76

Aww, well, you like it, and that’s the most important thing!!!! 😃😁❤️😊

Definitely! 😊

@karissa-chmil

Ahhh, yessss. Rilla of Ingleside is honestly one of my favorite books. <3 Walter is amazing.

Same!!!!!!

Did you ever see the poem someone wrote for him (the one that they allude to in the book many times)?

Um… I can’t remember… which poem was it?

@loopylin

Thanks so much! Yeah, I have no archery backround so I followed the reference with extra care XD

@princesachronicle22

Thanks so much! Glad you like it! XD

@keilah-h

XD thank you!

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizdwritings

Matthew

Jared’s brow furrowed and a forlorn expression covered his face.

He looked…lonely.

So lonely.

And I knew exactly how that felt.

Jared wrapped his arms around himself, trying to protect his body against the chill. “I-I don’t have any friends.”

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@euodia-vision

I am SO, SOO sorry it took me so long to respond!! My responce got deleted idk how many times and I ended up yelling at the computer “Wait…Error?! Of COURSE I wanted to do that! Why would I have pressed submit if I didn’t?!” XD

But, again, I’m so sorry! 😭😭 I hope you’ve been doing well!

HIIIII! *jumps up and down with…

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@freedomwriter76

I’m so glad he gets redeemed, but…but…

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

AHHH I know right!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

(i understand though. XD i have to do it a lot to charries, and everyone knows it 😂😂😂)

XDXD Haha, yeah. Sometimes it just has to happen, for the other characters to benefit from it (or not benefit, depends on the story 😂😭😭)

Aww, girl,…

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@thearcaneaxiom

You’re fine! Any help is appreciated, and you’ve never come off like that.

Also, if you ever do post a chapter of your WIP, I would love to read it and offer any advice I can!

@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h

Full honesty, I started this WIP maybe a couple months ago, so it’s not very far along yet worldbuilding-wise🤣. These are all things I’m going to have to work out. Thanks for mentioning them, because it makes things so much easier when I can have some kind of list of things to tweak or change.