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@loopylin

Thank you! Okay, I thought so. I really like Dante’s character! He’s very intriguing. I love his personality!!

@freedomwriter76

OH my gosh!! My heart!! RIKER!! it’s not your fault baby!! Not at all!!!

AND LEON AND ADELHIEDE!!! My goodness! Your sweet charries. LOVE THEM SO MUCH!!

UGH HANS!!!! YOU BETTER WATCH YOURSELF…

Girl!!! You did great on showing their feelings and overall reaction!! I mean, it’s heartbreaking, but you did a great job making my…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

AHHH!!! Thank y’all for all the kind words!!! <333

You’re so welcome, sweet friend!!!! 😀 🙂 <3 <3

And y’all…because of all of y’all’s encouragement, I’ve officially reached 37 pages in my draft of this book.

Thank y’all so much. 😭

Oh my goodness!!! That’s awesome!! You ARE SO WELCOME GIRL!! I’m so glad we were able to help encou…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh, I’m so sorry!! I’m just rocking the ‘mistaking someones character for another’ thing this month XD, right @mineralizedwritings ? XD.

For some reason, I thought Kad was your character i guess bc he’s in the group with Eddie and Ellie (Those are your charries right?) and Dante and Rueben and others.

You can probably just ignore my…

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@loopylin

Okay! Good ideas! Kad, you mean?

@felicity

TOTALLY!!!!

YES!! XD

Ok I will. 🙂

Hehe…your story is so cute. I love how…

The puppie’s parents were not sweet to them and they died. Heavenly Father killed the parents because they were mean to their children.
That’s so good!!! 😀

Yay!! I just read the 2nd chapter, and it’s so cute!! That’s actually really good for 10-11! I’m gonna g…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Your tag didn’t work 🙂

freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @felicity

Okay, heres the beginning of my old story, that I already posted so you won’t be completely lost bc it just plunges right back in XD.

Once apon a time there was a camel. The camel loved to drink some water at the forest and he swam across the ocean so he could get some water…

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@freedomwriter76

I get that!!! 😉

Thats good! Sometimes I feel like I’m so awkward and nobody gets it XDD.

Maybe so. 🙂

Yeah!

Lol, I get that. XDXDXDXD

🙂 XDD

Agreed!!! 😀 It’s just a great story all in all. 😉

Yes!!! I actually have a sweet memory watching the newer one! I was about 6,  at my grandparents house, listening to my dad and grandpa ta…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YESSSSS!!!! Tell it, sister!!! XDXDXDXD

YESSSS!!!! Hans is my least favorite. I think. It’s hard to choose between Adoulphus, Diethrich, and Has. THEY ARE ALL GOING DOWN!!!

You are sooo welcome!!! 😀 <3333

I’m feeling better already :)!!

Also, I just read your newest chapter, and it is SOOO GOOD!!!! LOVE IT!!

@freedomwriter76

UGHHH RIKER!!!! PRECIOUS RIKER!! I LOVE HIM!!!

OH, and GREAT cliffhanger ;). I’m dying to know what happens!!

@felicity

Thank you sister! Sending a prayer up for you!!!

You’re so welcome!! Thank you so much!! <3 <3 <3

Yeah I did, just one chapter…but somebody said they wanted more…I forget who…so I’ll probably put some more on here soon.

I found yours!! Yes, please share the second chapter!! It was so cute! I loved the historical vibe–even if you didn’t…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I am so sorry I’m just now responding!! Thank you for tagging me :). I LOVE IT!!! OMG sweet Tauren and Lesli!!

And Keiryn!! I feel myself wanting to like him, but also, not. XDD But i’m starting to get a feel for him :).

That’s cool that they live underground! Unless it’s like a spoiler that you don’t want to share yet, you…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Sure! I’m good with that! @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings Thoughts??

@felicity

Yeah! I kinda wanted to do NaNoWriMo but yeah, 50k is a lot. And tbh, that’s a short novel too. I think it’s good to make yourself write sometimes, but other times I think it makes my writing lower quality. Some of my best scenes are the ones I wrote really slowly, trying to get the wording perfect. I don’t think I can write much more…[Read more]

@felicity

Lol yeah, I’m already going pretty fast though lol.

I’ve written 12k words since like november… 10? I’m not sure. I was at 3k on the 13th.

idk if that’s actually fast, goodness time flies I didn’t realize it had been that long since I started the draft.

Just don’t want to get burnout lol. 😃

@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Matthew

I leaned against the wall, fiddling with a string on my shirt. Then I heard footsteps. And voices. Me and the rest of the group stiffened, waiting for something to happen.

The heavy wooden door opened, and a group of people was revealed.

There was Kaine, another young man, and…[Read more]

@felicity

Ah sorry Idk how to do that! 🤣

The best recommendation I can come up with is to make a list of the plot holes of your story (I have plenty 😅) and try to see if you can think of one solution for multiple at once. I personally really like doing that, and trying to connect characters the reader would never expect to be together, often…[Read more]

We could have them run into a villian? IDk. Maybe?

@theloonyone

Ooh, I know the band! But… just cause you told me about it. 😆

I like the song!

Lol

Yeah! It’s a good one.

@felicity

I am really on the edge of my seat now…

hehe… I wanna spoil SOOO BAD. I won’t though. I can’t 😆 I’ll just have to write faster lol