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@felicity

Oh my gosh girl!!! That chapter was soooo good 😊❤️👍!! I loved it!! But oh no, what happens to Lyaksandro?!?! I must know 😂!! But omg girl, I absolutely loved it!! Great job!!

@esther-c @Lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @keilah-h @loopylin Sorry if I missed anyone!

Tauren and Lesli

“Children from other worlds. What kind of strange magic is this?”

Tauren glances upwards. A large reptilian eye peers in through the tall stained glass window to their left.

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@esther-c @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

Matthew

“I’m Lesli.” Tauren’s…girl friend? said, reaching out her hand towards the Lyla.“I see we both have nervous little brother problems?”

Oh no!! Is-is- she going to make fun of me?

Of COURSE she will!! I told myself, who wouldn’t? You can barely say hi to someone new witho…[Read more]

@loopylin

Nah, he’s fine. It’s an old, scarred up injury.

Oh, okay.

Awwww 🥰 How old is Matthew again? Hehe, I’m not sure what Carter would think of that 😅

Haha, yeah. Matthew is 13, almost 14. How old is Carmen? I could see Matthew telling Carter “…Um…I-I think your sister is r-really s-s-sweet…and pr-pretty..” And Carter’s kind of like…[Read more]

@felicity

Yeah lol! Those revisions can be rough. But I would never remove Tauren!

@mineralizedwritings

Of course!! 😁

Thank you so much!!!

@esther-c

Yay!!! I totally will!!

Oh, thank you so much! I know she will appreciate it!!

Yes. Ev is veeeery outgoing! 🤣 And impulsive… and I could go on… and it may end up being an understatement. Lol 🤣

I love my boy. 😁

Lolol!! haha, Yeah! It’s hard not to 😂!

@loopylin

Whoa!!He sounds sca…[Read more]

@esther-c

Right!?!? Like…

Me: I’m social. I have like seventeen friends online!

Person: And in person?

Me: Er… three?

LOLOLOL!!!! Yes!! In person I have several good friends, like three best friends, and maybe ten acquaintances. And online…*counts on fingers* Like 15-20 best friends!!! 😊❤️😂

Lol. 🤣 My friends that I talk to face to face are a…

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@esther-c

Awesome!! I’m so glad!! 😄

Yeah!!

Oh and thx for the feedback. 🙂

You’re so welcome!!!

@mineralizedwritings

Ev is so fun to write!

And yes, when I was writing this, i was nervous for Ami too! 😆 I wasn’t quite sure what was going to happen. Lol

@theloonyone

XD Oh no!

I suppose Johnny has been through a lot then.

Or he went through a lot 😳

Oh and thx for the feedback. 🙂

@lightoverdarkness6

So, I think u did great!!

Awesome!! I’m so glad!! 😄

@whalekeeper

Thanks! That’s what other people have said too.

@felicity

Thanks!

Removing Tauren from the story!? I would never!😥🤣

He’s my sweet boi!

That would be tragic!

@kathleenramm

Hi, Kathleen!! 😄

(btw, I love your name! It’s so pretty!!)

Oooooh! Drafting! And ideas!

Let’s see here *rubs hands together*

• Major plot twist. Like a MAJOR plot twist. Like, super-sweet-friend-is-actually-the-villain plot twist. Or like, ther…

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@felicity

I know!!! That pic makes me break out in a grin every time I see it… *hugs Effie close while she squeals and wriggles*

Yes!! Aww!

Are Asher and Iris new characters or have I just never realized you had them?

Yeah!! They’re new. I actually just started writing chapter one of their book like five minutes ago 😂😅!

I think I know somebody t…

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@esther-c

Oh! I’m so nervous for Ami! And gotta say, I love Everton. He’s kinda fun albet impulsive 😂

Great chapter!

@theloonyone

Yeah! He was cool.

@loopylin

Oh don’t mind if I ask…

Who is Johnny and what happened to him?

(Y’know? Your signature? XD)

@lightoverdarkness6

I’ve got you guys!!

Right!?!? Like…

Me: I’m social. I have like seventeen friends online!

Person: And in person?

Me: Er… three?

Lol. 🤣 My friends that I talk to face to face are awesome and you guys are too!!! ❤️❤️

(All above statistics were absolutely not researched) &#x1f60…[Read more]

@felicity

woah!! That was amazing! I would love to read the entire book when or if you publish! I’m hooked 😊.

Lyaksandro hunches his shoulders into the wind and sniffs defiantly at the world as we enter the school courtyard and part ways.

So many of your people descriptions are just on point! I never would have used, “sniffed defiantly at the…[Read more]

That may have been a little unclear. How do the members of the Nadir family look alike, and how do the members of the Barlowes look alike? I think you guys would’ve gotten it anyway. 😅