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Allison replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Another great book to read! I don’t remember if I posted it before, but has anyone here read Wonder by R.J Palacio ?(Not sure if I spelled her last name right ) Did anyone like it? Did anyone cry (I might have just a little 🙂 ) Let me know! Also please t…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Yes, the parents did do a theme I was going to have there names also start with “S” but I think that would be to much, and I have not really created them yet, so its ok if I change there names 🙂
Thanks!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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I’m going to RP for Ev and Ami this afternoon. 🙂
(I’m not sure what happened to Ev and Tony after they left Clint and Ami. XD)
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh yeah, I gotcha. 😉
(I should probably take some time to do some good studying this week. Final exams are next week. 😬)
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Esther replied to the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Hmm…
Well, this is something that you’ve gotta be careful with. You could say that alliterative names is what their parents wanted, because I know some parents have a “theme”, if you will, for all their children’s names. (For example, me and my siblings all have Bible names [and so do my parents 😁])
So it all depends on what thei…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
First of all, great scene!! 😄
Second…
I love that idea about Corvina’s mother!! It would be really cool!!!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh poor November 😭😭 that was so good and sad, I can only imagine the reaction his dad is going to have 😭😥😥
(Pls tell November he’s absolutely lovely and he should ignore anyone who tells him otherwise?)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, glad you like them!
Yeah Layson is basically just idk what I’m doing but I love her so we’ll figure it out 😭
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Allison replied to the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
OK thanks! I have 2 other characters who are her brothers and there names are “Samuel Smith and Scott Smith” I haven’t picked out there middle names yet. Do you think that would make it sound unrealistic?
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Riya
Riya quickly looked away when one of the boys glanced up and noticed the two girls awkwardly searching for somewhere to sit.
“Hey, there’s a few seats over here!!!” He shouted, motioning towards the empty chairs. Riya sucked in an uneasy breath, hesitating to accept the boy’s offer.<…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Oh, I love that scene!!! It’s so good! I just love November XD
The Silvening thing is really cool, too! 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
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Alrighty, here’s Chapter 6! I’m not completely sure about this one… It feels right, and gets a lot of world/character building in I guess, but I’ve been told the stakes just aren’t completely there. So we’ll see XD
Chapter 6
Back on the ship, I introduce Arew to Sorren. He seems…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Hmmmmmm…. good question. A princess prbly wouldn’t have anything to do with looks, but the elf thing could be because her ears were hidden… Or maybe she could be like a shapeshifter, like how certain people could change into wolves or something… I don’t know XD
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Esther replied to the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Great question!!
But the answer solely depends on you and what you want for your story. I feel like the name Shauna Sarah Smith would stick in my mind if I read your story. It’s easy to remember, and it may be something that defines your character. If you decide to keep it, make sure you don’t use alliteration for any other cha…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks for doing that 🙂 Now it looks a lot better!
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Allison started the topic Alliterations?? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I was researching for writing tips and saw that people say you should not use Alliterations? My main charcters name is ” Shauna Sarah Smith”, I really like the sound of her name, but should I change it? Why shouldent we use alliterations? Thanks!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Fynn
Fynn rubbed the back of his neck. “Ok, ok. I’m sorry.” He looked away and rolled his eyes, making sure the fiery little kid didn’t see.
Both Lukas and the boy glared at him, not satisfied with the apology. Fynn sighed. He crouched down near the white haired boy who was clinging to Lukas,…[Read more]
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