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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
DID SOMEONE SAY….BUCK WILD!?!??!?!?!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, makes sense.
Huh…I have always loved multiple POV first person books, because then you get into the head of multiple characters! But I know it can be confusing, it just never has been a problem for me because in my mind, every character has a distinct voice.
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh my goodness I LOVE this girl 🤩🤩🤩 It’s soooo cute ❤🥰
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
AH YAY YOU’RE BACK *hug*
And AH Riker😭😭😭😭
1. Yes, I think it’s pretty realistic, you did a great job writing it. I’ve had small panic attacks before and they’re definitely not fun heh. I’m sure when someone’s cornered like that they’re not going to be thinking straight or exactly rational so his desperateness made sense. I…[Read more]
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Light posted an update 2 years, 5 months ago
GIRLL
I just finished the second to last episode of TFATWS, Truth, and oh my goodness girl…
OH MY WORD IT WAS SO GOOOOOOD AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AND BUCKYYYYYY THE BABYYYYYYY 😭😭😭😭😭🥹🥹🥹❤❤❤❤
Sam and Bucky’s relationship just makes me so happy 🥹🥹 He’s so precious 😭❤
And Karli makes me so sad like I know she’s probably not gonna…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
WHYYYYY
UGHHH
I forgot what I was gonna say
I know! First person books can either be super good or just…cringe..
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
@everyone
Why do you guys hate first person so much?????
It’s just funny because like all my writing friends in real life absolutely LOVE first person, and then on KP everyone seems to strongly dislike it!
I personally LOVE first person books with multiple pov’s….idk…they are just so fun!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Random tagssss @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @grcr @anyone-else-cuz-i-can’t-think-of-anyone-else-right-now
Ignore tag or read on!
Just wanted to share a cute scene from a WIP that I’ve been working on a little too much. 😉
I seriously should be working on my main WIP rn, but whatever.It’s not p…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
I would say, just use a lot of Abbie Emmons’ advice (I’m sure you’re probably doing that already though XD) and make everything that happens build the internal conflict more.
And about first person…obviously don’t do it if you don’t want to, but I think first person helps bring out the character’s voices a lot more. While the actual…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
I guess I should tag some peeps. Don’t feel obligated to reply 🙃
@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theducktator @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @beth-torres @smiley @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @rae @trailblazer @lightoverdarkness6
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Esther replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 2 years, 5 months ago
So I need help.
XD
I’ve been plotting in my head for a contemporary novel that I’m really excited about. I love the concept, the characters, and even the setting so much! I just need a better structure for my plot. So far I’ve been writing random scenes, I just have a feeling that when I finally sit down to write the book in whole, it’s not gon…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
1.     Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun🫠)
I felt like it was pretty realistic, but I’ve also never written anything like that before or experienced something like it. I a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Hey, everyone!! Just so y’all are aware, I’ll probably begin posting the next polls sometime after Easter. (:
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @smiley @rae @anyone-else
ok, ok, I know I’m supposed to be gone but I really want some feedback on this chapter…I like how it turned out but I just REALLYYYYY need some feedback, haha, so I may still pop on and off on occasion but don’t expect…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Your Passion in Writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Thanks lol! I’m a super visual person, so when I’m ‘writing’ scenes in my head, it’s like a Americanized anime XD
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 5 months ago
We’ve all cheated Wyoh by sharing pics through links. Canva’s free, all you have to do is make an account and upload the pic to a design. Then share the link so anyone can view.
But if you don’t want to do that then… idk, yeah whatever 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I could only think of one book 😭 I’ve read so many though, I don’t even know how I could only come up with one XD Maybe I’ll think of another one later, lol.
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
What’s up with that jingle? I’ve got nothing in my head but the billion songs I’m trying to keep straight for choir.
Haha 😂 Do you enjoy choir though? I did it for a year and really enjoyed it. (Until the choir director changed… then it wasn’t so fun… :/)
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
You might have succeeded in getting that jingle stuck in my head… 😑😂😂
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