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@keilah-h

Yeah it is really fun to write! However, Neveah’s only one of the main characters, so she’s kind of a sub-plot.

@keilah-h

It’s about a woman named Neveah who was kidnapped, along with her baby girl, Hanna. They are separated, and Neveah is imprisoned in a work camp. When she escapes, she is determined to find her daughter, no matter the cost.

@whalekeeper

Actually, that would be great! If you want to add critiques or anything, let me know.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Over the course of last night and today, I wrote this chapter explaining how Sef ends up with Iver, etc. I’m not sure whether to add another one about that or not. Because I want to explain that Iver is abusive (the…[Read more]

@rae @jonas

So I just read it, and I’m wondering about some similar things. So is this universe set in the future of our universe, because you used Immanuel’s name, suggesting this is Christianity specifically. Or is it just a filler name like you alluded to earlier, and this is an entirely separate universe?

It’s funny, the brother sister…[Read more]

@acancello

Oh okay! Cool! By the way I love the quote.

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we go back to page one and do it all over again?

That is so sweet and sad I love it! Did you make it up or did you find it somewhere?

@rae

Ahh, yes, much like my sister and I as see. There’s quite a few Sibling pairs on KP actually. Siblings are awesome!

@freedomwriter76

Thats so sweet and sad!🥹 I really like Riker, but reading all your other posts I think Leon is my favorite, but then its so hard to chose.💗

@trailblazer

I would love to read it!

@rae

Both. It depends on the subject. I go hard on subjects I’ve run through my mind over and over again until I’m sure that this is the way. Soft on subjects I don’t understand or don’t want the reader to focus on because it’s not the main point.

Yeah, it’s a spectrum really, and it changes depending on what aspect your doing. Tolkien for examp…[Read more]

@aranel

Hi Sarah! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and  I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions &#x1f609…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes he is! I cant believe you noticed! But yeah, hes her best friends older brother and a half friend half enemy to Shauna 🙂

@aranel

Hi Sarah! I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, finding divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and my current project is a universe I’m working on with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (hard meaning concrete rules for the reader to und…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah… If I’m being perfectly honest, sometimes I casually aim at the boys I like… XD FAVORITISM!!!

Haha, that’s a good strategy, lol

Hi Rae! I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math (yes I know), finding divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and my current project is a universe I’m working on with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (hard meaning concrete rules for the reader to…[Read more]

@acancello

Oooh isn’t he in your story about Shauna Sarah Smith? I recognize his last name!

@highscribeofaetherium @acancello

Thanks!

@rae

Hi! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and  I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen!

A really weird fact about me is that dogs don’t seem to like my blue eyes.

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@jonas

Well, the structure can be complete, but the completeness of a language is arbitrary. Toki Pona just has over 200 words, because it is so minimalistic, but it is functional. The case here is you can have a completed structure, then the words themselves you can come up with when needs be, or you can work out a small set of words, and…[Read more]

@jonas

Writing in general is hard, but hardness is subjective, and it’s all up to what you want. Here though, I don’t think it would be that different from developing a magic system. It’s all about the structure. In terms of developing things like lexicon can come later if at all.

@jonas

I am always happy to nerd out over languages. There’s many ways they could be used to convey meaning. They could function as phonemes, allowing a spoken language where they act as letters, or they might not carry that idea at all. Since they are made to visually represent a concept, they would be referred to as pictographs, like…[Read more]