Kads

@jonas

Oops! I didn’t even notice that XD I will fix that!!

@savannah_grace2009

Ah, I see. 😄 lol

@grcr

Marcurious is between 16 and 18. I haven’t really figured that out yet haha!

@savannah_grace2009

Interesting chapter!! I like it!

oh, and I really loved this:

“Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t kill you right now,” the Pythonos pressed the bloody knife to Marcurious’ throat.

Marcurious coughed. “Because I am just so amazing,” he flashed the Pythonos a smile.

One question… how old is Marcurious?

@scoutfinch180

It’s completely fine, no rush on how fast you give me feedback! (: I understand we all have lives outside of writing and KP xD

I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps.

Actually, I would prefer if you gave your opinion on the first few chapters of my WIP and kind of go…[Read more]

@jonas

I guess it would probably make the most sense to have all the powers be something similar, where the user redistributes a property of their body to other parts. That could be pretty cool, I guess. I could do this as sort of Feruchemy, but you just redistribute attributes across your body instead of storing them away (where you lose some of…

[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, that’s pretty much what I’ve been thinking. I’m definitely going to keep working on this one.

Sounds good!

That is what I was trying to say too. I guess I was being too concise to properly get across what I was trying to say. The reason I don’t like that is because light and darkness are both real, while voidflames are not. I would p…

[Read more]

@jonas

Really? Huh. I didn’t know that. I feel like I’ve been aware of those terms for a super long time, but I didn’t read any of his books until last summer.

Oh, yeah lol! It came from him!

@a-r-kuhn @jonas

(KP just ate my post, so it may or may not randomly pop up in the following few days)

It’s too true! Unfortunately I end up nodding too much if I’m reading anytime past one. I can stay up for other things, but I can’t be sitting down. Sanderson is worth it though!

@rae

I officially label myself an idiot who can’t explain anything right!

 

Ugh! I’ll reply once I cool off…

Don’t label yourself an idiot:(

I look forward to your reply!

@a-r-kuhn

Hmm, I’ve never really thought of it in these terms… Let’s put it this way: There’s rules, but I might be the only one who knows them right now. Really depends on the world. I have one world with a complicated system of magic, and a different world where there’s not really any true magic, just people with native abilities. In the magic…

[Read more]

@jonas

I don’t really have answers to any of those questions XD. I liked the idea of having a weird sort of fire like that, but yeah, it’s not very interesting yet. The magic system as a whole is not to far developed, so maybe when I have more details I can differentiate the two flames. Otherwise, I probably will get rid of it.

That’s fair! I thi…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Also I forgot to mention…I don’t have all the exerpts from my WIP here on this forum. I will post them for you on here if you agree to help me. (because I didn’t want to take up a bunch of pages on here for no reason haha)

WHY IS THIS NOT WORKING?!?!

@scoutfinch180

@scoutfinch18o

Heyyy, I don’t think we’ve really met! I’m Sara (which you probably already knew haha!)

I have been stalking the topic where you’ve been critiquing RAE’s WIP…and I really like your critiquing style!

I was wondering…if you could maybe….critique mine too….?

I understand if you don’t have the time to help two people…I…[Read more]

@esther-c @acancello @grcr @vinagirl @hybridlore

Introducing….Marcurious!!!

Here’s the newest chapter I wrote in my WIP:

Marcurious deftly snatched a ripe apple from the market stall, and sauntered away, holding his head high as if without a care in the world.

He pasted a look of innocence on his face.

I didn’t steal this apple. Nope. I p…

[Read more]

@esther-c

I love those characters SOOO much!!!!!! And their character arcs are amazing!

@anyone-who-needs-a-good-cry

I just wrote something very depressing and sad….so if anyone wants to read it…well…

A dull throbbing sensation at the back of her neck.

Anger burning hot in her veins.

Screams echoing around her, both her own, and the screams of innocent souls.

The smell of alcohol, of chloroform, of pain, of fear.

The smell…

[Read more]

@rae

Proper amount of sleep? My amount of sleep is apparently four to six hours… Whatever.

🙃

I’m not sure exactly what you’re saying but what I was trying to say is, if the Universe knew no god who had all the Omni’s, then we… Idk how to say this… Would know no greater thing, so that would be the ultimate god. If that makes sense.

I’m quite fine…[Read more]