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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 18 hours ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @theducktator @liberty @ellette-giselle
*sits back and watches as the chaos and questions unfold*
And yes, Liberty, Hans hates Jews and is the main villain of my first novel (and other novels as well…he’s the main villain in several of my WW2 WIP ideas).
and yes, Elishavet, Hans’ entire life has been pretty…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 21 hours ago
I don’t know how many snowballs I even have…but here’s 161 words:
She didn’t want to wake up.
Closing her eyes, turning her face into her pillow and pulling the blanket over her head, she desperately wanted this to be a dream, wanted to go back to sleep and pretend nothing was wrong.
But Aubrielle persisted, the worry and unease in her voice c…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 21 hours ago
Okay thank you guys!!! <33
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 22 hours ago
OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 22 hours ago
(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Okay….
I have come to a decision lol
I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.
Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 6 days, 8 hours ago
Just watched Klaus on Netflix and it is the cutest Christmas movie ever I want to watch it again already
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 11 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 11 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 11 hours ago
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 16 hours ago
*saves snowballs*
Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 16 hours ago
To everyone who threw snow at me:
I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….
I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!
I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 16 hours ago
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 6 days, 20 hours ago
@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle
Thank y’all so much!💜
@ellette @elishavet @koshka @keilah-h @rae @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol
Again, extra words from the song “Here Again” by Elevation Worship.
Leon Aesthetic for the 3rd book! 🥹
Y’all know I love Riker…but y’all, when I say Leon has also stolen my heart (and broken it,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 21 hours ago
400 more words.
I honestly can’t believe I’m sharing this…HUGE, MASSIVE, PLOT TWISTY SPOILERS
@rae you might wanna read this🫣
Hans is taking over his own story
“So, you figured it out.”
Hans stepped forward, fists clenched, eyes burning. “That’s why you never loved me…why you never…nev…
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 22 hours ago
@elishavet-pidyon I love it💜😭😭
Is there no one else you can throw snowballs at???🫠🤣
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freedom replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 22 hours ago
*settles back and watches everything unfold*
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Everything you said fits. There’s definitely some gothic architecture and old buildings mixed in with the newer technology
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
I love all of these ideas thank you!
Wait, I just realized Brea might be too old to be watch over like that. Oops. XD Well maybe the idea can still be used with another young character.
No, she’s like 9 or 11ish. She was an unplanned kid, so that’s why there’s a big age gap between her and Lois.Your idea totally works.
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
@theducktator That’s some good advice right there
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Loopy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Didn’t want to make a new topic, so this seemed like the most fitting place for this.
I’m a bit stuck with my story rn and I just need some filler or something. So does anyone have ideas for things my characters could do/trouble they could get into? It could be as ridiculous or mundane as you want, I don’t care. Any idea is a good idea right…[Read more]
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