You’re welcome!

Yes, I’m thinking that it’s his only option. And the earning Vital makes sense, it would be in an insanely high demand material, which would make it extremely expensive. But it also needs to be semi accessible to the public so people survive. 🤔 It would create a very interesting economy dynamic I think, I’l…

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I think your idea is rather interesting! I might as well give my two cents, but for me, if a romance winds up in my stories, it tends to just kind of happen, I’ll just be thinking and I’ll realize, “oh, they make a good couple!” or something along those lines. So, do take my cents with a grain of salt lol.

I recommend…[Read more]

Definitely! I never properly researched the era when I was still in Highschool, but it really was a fascinating time in history!

Yess, another Sabaton fan!!!

Also, I totally get nerding out over WW2, my husband loves the topic, and so I wind up learning a lot by extension lol!

Oh, cool!

Angus would say that he dosen’t think he was always immortal, because injuries used to heal a lot slower than they do now, and he would decline for you to pet Wolfy (he’s bad at naming things, and it’s a nod to an old stuffed animal I had) but Wolfy would make you pet him anyway.

Lenora, who’s responsible for the…[Read more]

Ooo, what kind of magic does Lois use? (sorry if you already answered this question lol) How does the magic work to cause spells?

I guess I’ll introduce my character:

Angus (name could be changed later, idk): A stoic immortal soldier with a pet wolf/big dog who gets stuck making sure two teenagers don’t get themselves killed on his…[Read more]

I gave you my thoughts!

Also, I’m so sorry to hear of your loss and I’ll be praying for you and your family 🥰.

First off, this is a great improvement, you’ve done a great job! I did give my opinions, but again, I’m not a professional, so take my criticisms with a grain of salt, and don’t be frustrated with yourself, this is one draft of wh…[Read more]

You’re fine!

Ahh that makes sense!

Beyonders is a middle-grade fantasy trilogy, and it’s quite well-done, but not written from a particularly Christian perspective, (I think the author is Mormon? but it doesn’t greatly affect the story, but a certain character that only appears for a brief time is similar to the oracle of Delphi)

The…[Read more]

@every-one else who commented on here gave such good advice as I’ve struggled with this myself!

I don’t know if it helps but in one WIP I had to set aside for the time being (it was too complex, needed to take a step back to reorganize later), my God-figure was included like you demonstrate, but was treated more as an enigma or…[Read more]

Those look really good! the one on the far right really reads as sci-fi, and I love the claw feet!

Hi! I’m @scoutfinch180!  Nice to meet you!

Interesting to hear you write fanfics about Ghibli and Star wars, I sometimes listen to What if videos on Youtube. What kind of fanfics do you like to write? And I can totally see a Ghibli fanfic working, I’ve sometimes wondered how a sequel to Spirited Away would go. My favorite Ghibli…[Read more]

Ah I see, thank you for the clarification!

and thank you so much! I hope the kittens are ok lol.

Thank you! And I love your sketch!

@highscribeofaetherium

I have no clue what exploding kittens is but thank you!

@whalekeeper

Thank you! I didn’t think of that but I totally see it now lol! (finally found another Atla fan lol)

Thank you for the useful feedback! I think I like Marcel the way he is, although I might change some…

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Here’s something I drew today:

It’s ok! I’m still learning too, and here’s some of my limited knowledge:

For the glowy lights, I use a layer-type called color dodge, for a really colorful light, I use overlay, and multiply for shadows.

I used an airbrush for the more blended light like sunrays and such, and used a textured blender where I wanted texture, and a blur…[Read more]

not necessarily, they weren’t meant to be any sort of person in particular beyond accidentally reminding me of the elf versions of two old oc’s who’s story will not see the light of day lol (at least not in it’s current form), and both being revered guardians of different times of day.

I totally get that! if you want your character’s…[Read more]

I love that! she’s so cute! I like your use of color! Is this meant to be a regular outfit?

@whalekeeper

Marcel looks good! he has a clear design that is easy to recognize, which is super important with comic characters (if you’re doing that, or if it’s an illustration or just a design from a description in a non-visual medium it’s…[Read more]

You’re welcome!

thank you!

For the trees, I drew the silhouette, and then I used a clipping mask on top to add color/texture, and I took a photo from Pinterest to use as a reference/color palette, and did this several times for depth, blurring the farthest layers, going from big to small branches, if that helps you!

I’ve called him Ransom up til now, and I’ve tried Ben, but it’s not quite hitting for me? I want something that could be in a fantasy story, but isn’t so fantastically spelled that you can’t pronounce it XD And I want to be able to age him up, and it doesn’t sound too babyish.

I don’t know what name would fit him best exactly, bu…[Read more]

I drew this a couple days ago seeing how a character might look later on in his arc, what do you all think?

Oh you’re fine lol! I’ve ranted so many times myself lol!

Ohh ok than you!

It’s truly a shame, really. TRON has so much potential, and on one hand I’d love to see it become a franchise, but on the other, I don’t know if it would get the Star Wars/Marvel treatment if it was resurrected. Bottom line, I would only want it resurrected if the person in charge was someone I could trust to use it for a good story,…[Read more]

I fight for the users too!

I did read Marcurious’s intro, and it was pretty interesting!

I’ll check it out!

Interesting! How can you foreshadow Grathmere before this point perhaps? does Alpha have powers that are similar that Nahim makes him hide?

The scene is to be written like a horror, if you will, with the reader feeling dread and fear. I’m not good enough to write that way rn. Especially since I don’t read horror. This is actually the onl…

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I’m so flattered you value my opinion!

I might be able to help a little, but I am a hobby writer so I can’t guarantee how often I’m able to critique/post, but I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps. I wish I could guarantee you help, but I might have plans…[Read more]

I’ll make a full reply later since I’m angry at myself rn, and when I get angry, most ppl think it’s at them. Same with disappointment.

It’s ok, I totally get it! And don’t be angry at yourself, we’ve all had those moments. Sometimes I get really frustrated with whatever I’m doing and get super mad at my story and self for it not being what…[Read more]