@savannah_grace2009
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Fynn
“From Aletheia. We used to live in the District of Daemarrel, but some things happen, and now… well we don’t exactly have a permanent home at the moment.” He hadn’t quite accepted that truth until he finally spoke the words. It was true. They had no permanent place to live. “But to be honest, I don’t mind that much. I l…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Oooh, cool chapter! Love it!! And of course, love Marcurious. 😁
You wanted to critique my writing too, I think? If you want you can use the same link, or I can make you a new doc. Whichever you prefer (:
This link works for me! Unless you want all our comments to be separate. I’ll try to start reading it next week once our s…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yes, I think Riina would love to see Jr humiliated, and Nat would help her out! XD
Yes, he’s eighteen in this AU.
@highscribeofaetherium @sara too
Thank you for the offers! I just first would like to see what Riina does if you don’t mind.
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
I didn’t reply earlier, but I am praying.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Just so you know, it seems that you have that google doc set up as view only. It would probably be more useful if you had it so that we can make comments, but that’s up to you.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Ah, I see. 😄 lol
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Interesting chapter!! I like it!
oh, and I really loved this:
“Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t kill you right now,” the Pythonos pressed the bloody knife to Marcurious’ throat.
Marcurious coughed. “Because I am just so amazing,” he flashed the Pythonos a smile.
One question… how old is Marcurious?
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hybridlore replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Ooh, this is really interesting! Haha, I noticed that about @scoutfinch180 too, it was very thorough!
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m so flattered you value my opinion!
I might be able to help a little, but I am a hobby writer so I can’t guarantee how often I’m able to critique/post, but I can get started on giving you my opinion on the excerpt I saw introducing Marcurious tomorrow perhaps. I wish I could guarantee you help, but I might have plans…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
*steeples fingers together and sets elbows on table*
@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @idk, anyone’s welcome
I discovered Alpha’s greatest fear (I’m very proud of myself).
At first, Alpha, to me and to my charries, seems fearless. Sometimes he also seems heartless (like the time he almost murdered a doctor because the doctor obeyed orders…[Read more]
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Raegan Aubrey replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
@savannah_grace2009
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Lol! I started a few years ago with my Dad. When he had back problems he stopped eating it and things like chips and other junk foods. It helped him a lot and I decided that I would do the same to improve my overall health because I’m super active. I felt better after I stopped. But thats just my personal opinion, its…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
I know it’s not the best habit…but when I’m sad or depressed I eat ice cream and stuff like that…we have tons of ice cream and cookies and Grandma brought popcorn cake and khuchen (a German dessert) and I just made brownies…because we already don’t have enough sugar….lol
Yeah, I used to do that too. Though after I stopped eatin…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m so sorry about that, thats rough. Ill be praying <3
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Ruth replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @anyone else
I have a new thing to place in my forum signature…
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @hybridlore @rae @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-sorry-I-can’t-think-XD
Ok, I am so excited to officially introduce these characters!! They are pretty well developed, but their story is still in the works. 😂 I love their brother-sister dynamic so much and I just love them so much 😁 Here t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Fynn
Thousands of ideas that would get him flew through his mind, but he pushed them out. Liv wouldn’t agree. There was no chance.
But Xandro…
Now that would be fun…
He noticed he was smirking and Liv seemed a little confused. “Interesting. So, do you have family back in Andromeda?”
Uh-oh… if Fynn finds Xandro… 👀
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
So, I actually prayed for this this morning. I specifically prayed that she would be able to get on medications that would take away her pain! God is good!!❤️
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Aw, that’s rough! Also not a fun way to be woken up, either. Continuing to pray for healing!
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Fynn
He let his jaw drop as he stared at Liv’s hand. “What?! That’s so cool! Wait…” he cast glances around them and lowered his voice. “How much can you do that? Like, could you flood the room or create a huge water fountain? If you so desired, of course.” He tried to hide the mischievous smile that tugged on his lips.
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