@savannah_grace2009
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I agree with the majority of what Jonas already said. Although I think smaller stories can have many prospective, but it has to be done right. I could think of a few examples, though most are more contemporary, but I’m sure there’s many fantastical. I think a cast of 5 or 6 is a fair enough amount that won’t be…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, it’s odd. She wanted me to help her prep for NaNoWriMo:(
I like this chapter! My favorite part was how happy the robot got when he named her “Thing”. that was great!
Lol! Thanks! I’m glad it seems to be producing an enjoyable dynamic between the two😂
Great chapter! The bounce between present and past tense was very conf…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@esther-c @grcr @trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @everyone!
=-=–=-=-Hugo=-=-=-=
Hugo Searched everywhere for Ottoline. Under the tables, around the food buffet, around all the dancers, and finally, finally, he saw her coming out of the basement, holding hands with Hedieh.
“Ottoline!” He cried out in relief, “where were…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, someone was talking about that… Weird! I wonder why?
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You dont RP to much, I love to read yours!
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 11 months ago
Hey guys! Are my posts showing up for y’all? When I go to the topic page, I see them, but they don’t show up in recent topics :/
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
You might not care, but I try to maintain a fairly equal ratio of male MCs to female MCs in a book. This shouldn’t be the deciding factor, but consider that adding Liv as a MC would give you a 2 to 4 ratio (double the amount of female characters to male), whereas you currently have as even a ratio as possible with 2 to 3…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
The amount of characters a book can handle depends on how long it is and how “main” the characters will be.
I keep using Stormlight as an example for some reason but in Stormlight, which will be 5 books long, each over 1000 pages, there are three main characters, but there are probably a dozen or so main-ish characters who…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Just popping in, I know I haven’t been very active on here…
Is 6 MC’s too many, or should I stick with my original 5?
It really depends. If Liv is going to be important enough to be an MC and if you can make each of their viewpoints interesting and make every character unique, I’d say go for it. I know GodlyFantasy has, li…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Any help would be great. I’m a hopeless case when it comes to making up names of places in my fantasy world. I normally end up looking up weird names or fantasy town name generators. So yeah.
The only reason i made it all caps was because it would make it sound/look more significant than just the word “unit” and it’s more…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I would say it completely depends on relevance to the main plot. Is she going to have future interactions with the main cast? Will her actions have an impact on the overall story? If not, then I would say it would be best not to, but there is another option.
Each book of the Stormlight Archive is split into five parts, and…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You’re welcome, great chatting with you! <3
I prayed about my relationship with my sister too, and it got so much better. <3 it’s definitely the best solution
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Thank you for the prayers girl!
Oof 11 and no much in common sounds rough. I became close to my sister once we were both in the teenage phase XD.
You can do something ou don’t like for a little while, and she might appreciate it if you played pretend with her for even like 40 minutes. Honestly though when I was wanting to…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @kathleenramm @spinner4him @lightoverdarkness6
(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)
Ok, here’s the third chapter! It may be the last I post of it for a while if at all, but we’ll…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I think there were roughly a hundred people! I wonder… although it’s not likely 😅
Wouldn’t that be cool! Was yours also on the 13th?
I should have the next scene done by tomorrow for the RP 🙂
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Enid replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings
I think everyone on here depends on their stories at some point in their lives, so you’re not alone 😊 Even the people who don’t as much. Everyone needs their imagination for different reasons, and they eventually learn how to wean themselves off it.
I definitely have my friend group of characters, tho I…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah honestly I don’t mind that we’re off track either lol. It’s a good conversation 🙂 And I don’t normally jump into the Chat Chat because I get lost whenever I try, haha.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Imma respond over here so we don’t clutter the party lol
I’m doing…okay, I guess. thanks for asking!
Np! 🙂
It’s hard for me to force myself to be social, especially with people who I have nothing in common with and who think I’m a little mentally insane because of how much I write (which they might be right…). I’ll talk…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
LOL 😅
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I kind of have my own little “friend group/family” of characters in my WIP. Non writers will NEVER understand, lol.
lol Same
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I think I can see them? At least I can see this one…
I think so? I’ve been having trouble with my posts too.
@euodia-vision @savannah_grace2009
Okay, good XD I think they worked.
@freedomwriter76
Oh okay, thanks. It just wasn’t showing the topic in recent topics, but I know KP goes through a lot of glitches so I’m glad it still works!