SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009 It does have so much potential! And ehh, reading through it and editing little bits is half the fun for me lol

This is random but I’ve always been SO self conscious of my romance scenes…like part of me is obsessed with writing them but the other part of me is like I can never show this to ANYONE lol!

BRUHHH this is exactly how…[Read more]

I’m done with my 650 words!

Maybe I’ll post them later.

But now it is time for REVENGE 😈

@jonas 💨⚪4x

@theducktator 💨⚪4x

@linus-smallprint 💨⚪4x

@grcr 💨⚪2x

@rae 💨⚪2x

@savannah_grace2009 💨⚪2x

@raxforge 💨⚪2x

@esther-c💨⚪2x

*laughs in…

@ellette-giselle

Lol, yeah

@whalekeeper

Oh, cool! How does the word count thing work? Does the website have a word counter thing, or do you just enter your word count or what?

@savannah_grace2009

I did see the website; I was just still a little confused. XD I might try it this year.

@savannah_grace2009

For some reason I like this a lot better than the ones where she was little. It fits a bit more somehow. Throws us right into the story.

For some reason it reminds me of the Keeper of the Lost Cities intros. I don’t know if you’re familiar with that book series but I was just reading the latest installment so it’s still fresh…[Read more]

I got an email about something called Crazy Writing Week. It looks fun. Does anyone here know what that is?

@whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @esther-c

@hybridlore @grcr @help-I’m-out-of-tags

@savannah_grace2009

Since I don’t know where you’re going with this, I can’t really provide a good opinion on whether you should keep it or not. It’s very different from any of your other drafts (which isn’t a bad thing!).

I would just say that if you’re going back to add more details about Andromeda, made sure you don’t get too info-dumpy,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I agree with what Ellette said.
You should keep it! 🙃

@savannah_grace2009

I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.

I say keep it

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh my goodness. 🤯

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, I never read the prologue you posted…sorry. I’ll get to it this weekend.

@stephie

Forgot to return here.

The last chapter I wrote was 2,546 words long, so I think I got through all those snowballs.

Now I have 20. What to do with them?

Throws 4 at each of the following:
@theducktator
@grcr
@highscribeofaetherium
@savannah_grace2009
@theshadow

Welp… I wrote a short story! XD

If you have the time, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it before I show it to friends and family. (It’s kinda long, I apologize, lol. It’s under 11k.)

Tagging some folks just in case you’re interested, but don’t feel obligated to read it. :))

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @savannah_grace2009

No worries! This week got really busy and I got sick halfway through, so I probably wouldn’t have been able to RP very soon afterwards anyway. Where should we start Lukas and Livia? I have no idea what day it is in relation to the dance (which has been planned for like forever now…it’s craaazzzyyyy 😂)

@elishavet-pidyon

Aw, I won’t throw snowballs at you then. Truce.

*Whips around* @rae +2 @mineralizedwritings +2 @hybridlore +2 @savannah_grace2009 +2 @calyhuge +2 @loopylin +4

@hybridlore @theshadow @savannah_grace2009 ❤️

Thank you guys so much. :’)

@savannah_grace2009

😂🤣

Oy, the life of a writerrr 💀

@savannah_grace2009

I’m not 100% sure either 🤣

Ok that makes sense! 😉 Yeah, I could always take a snippet of it and write it how I would interpret a four year old thinking through that if you wanted an example. (i don’t know if that’s weird or not 😂)

@savannah_grace2009

Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]

@rae    @savannah_grace2009

Ooo, that sounds great! I’d love to terrorize Chase and Sef.

@ellette-giselle

Can I bring the Agents back?

Please!

 

🙂

Considering who you tagged, are you planning to break up Sef and Chase’s reunion? Cuz if Chase has to fight the Agents too, he would probably die, and at very least be asleep for days. He’s used his power a lot the past day.

@savannah_grace2009

I think I’d like to go with the aunt…[Read more]