@savannah_grace2009
Active 1 week, 5 days ago- Rank: Chosen One
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hybridlore replied to the topic Anyone just love Eragon by Christopher Paolini? in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I just picked up this book at a yard sale because I remembered you said you loved it, lol! Haven’t read it yet, but I’ll let you know what I think!
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 9 months ago
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I’m honored…
aww, thank you! And don’t worry; this scene is sticking around for a while. Unless I ditch the novel, in which case I will recycle said scene. I love it very much, hehe. 😉
Aww!!! That’s so sad and yet so sweet. Great work!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 sure! That sounds cool!
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Don’t worry about it! Thank you for tagging me 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
From what I read so far, its really good! I will be checking it out from time to time (Dont worry, its not that I dont like it, I love it! But I am working on my WIP a bunch right now, 54 pages! 🙂 ) Thank you for sharing it!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Thank you for reading it!
I’m glad I’m not alone in this… struggle… lol. I might have to try spreading them out like you mentioned.
I’m very excited to share more… when I get there……perhaps half a year from now. (Just kidding, lol.) 🙃
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 That is so good! So well written, and it makes me want to read more!
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 9 months ago
Awww, I love it! You should definitively keep it, its so sweet!
I love it! Poor Sef, at least she has Lilitu. 🙂
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-GRCR- replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 9 months ago
Hmm… strange….
I just tried to change mine… and it seems it’s not working again. ☹️
But don’t worry, KP should fix it soon.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 9 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 9 months ago
I wasn’t able to either, but it worked for me yesterday.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
That sounds great!!
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
What I think @thearcaneaxiom is asking you:
Which of these two is Rishona?
1. Inspired by Eve, but is actually a different person, in a different fantastical world. Not actually Eve, just a shadow of Eve.
2. Actually Eve. In a twisted version of Earth, where some details of reality have been changed.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @thearcaneaxiom
Just watching from afar and thought I’d chip in.
I think from reading some of Savannah’s work, it is heavily parallel to the stories of the Bible, but you can’t really guess something like that as the reader, because unless the writer clarifies their intent, an Eve-Allegory and an Alternate-Eve are essen…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.
Right, she represents Eve, but is she literally Eve? Is Earth here the same Earth we know, and therefore the story of Adam and Eve is really just a translation of Rishona’s story?
And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
No worries! Making my display name different from my tag was sure to mess some people up.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
No worries about the quotes, it’s legible!
Oh wow I never thought about it like that! I was just thinking that the prologue would be how the world of Andromeda took a turn and how evil was let into the world. No, Earth and Andromeda don’t represent Adam and Eve, they’re just two different worlds. I’m not sure if that answe…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
The way I usually quote is to copy the section you’re quoting. Paste it in as a separate paragraph and hit the quote symbol (next to the italics symbol.)
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