@savannah_grace2009
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @trailblazor @grcr @savannah_grace2009
Kaine shudders, crossing his arms over his dark green sweater vest. A stiff breeze edges through the tight weave of his shirt, pushing the rain to his skin. Running a cold clammy hand through his hair, Kaine turns around to see over the crest of the hill.
I’m g…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Some more…
Summer 1884
I wished Mama would let me drop out of school, even though I was only fourteen. Since all the crops were planted, we returned to school, but this time Albert and Abe stayed behind. The first day we went back, George dragged his feet.
“Come on, George!” I turned around and walked bac…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Haha, you’re fine! Let your imagination take you wherever you want, maybe it’ll produce more ideas I could end up using at some point lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @grcr @savannah_grace2009
Kari
Kari glanced down at the notebook in her hand and the increasing shadows outside. The sun was setting, and this was nothing like what she had planned for her evening. If she didn’t leave soon, it would be dark, and she didn’t want to be alone in this house…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@trailblazer @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Great! 😆
Lane
Lane looked at Ottoline, accessing what kind of person she was. His eyes fell on her scars, and it reminded him of one of his friends back where he lived. His face vividly displayed a desire to ask about the scars, but he changed his…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello @freedomwriter76 @esther-c
Kari’s coming to join!
Breathing heavily from the exertion, Kari paused on her way up the hill to catch her breath. As she looked around at her surroundings, she noticed a house she had not seen before. She had intended to climb the hill and spend the evening…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Got it, lol!
Lane
He listened silently as the two people exchanged a few words.
I should probably find out where I am…
Lane shivered before he stepped inside the building. He slowly walked to a small statue in the corner of the room. He reached…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
(I take it Lane has crashed the statue?)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings
Alright! 😆 Here is mine.
Lane
Lane stared intently at the piece of paper in his left hand. Something was scribbled onto the note, but whatever it said was illegible. These directions never want to work, huh? Tyne never writes things down p…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr
Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!
(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)
(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009
😱 I wrote almost the whole RP and then accidentally tapped on one of the links at the bottom of the page and lost it! 😭 I don’t think I have time to rewrite the whole thing now, but I promise I’ll have it posted later today or tomorrow. 😅
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
This next section I’m gonna post is one that needs a little more fleshing out as well. It’s short, and you’ll be able to see it feels more like a summary than really telling the story. If you have any ideas of scenarios I could fit in here or things you think should happen with the characters, let me know!
Over…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
I love that one! It captures her personality really well. Mine never turn out that good, lol!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6
Thank you guys <33
Oh that looks so cool! So this wip involves like the parents of the bois… riker or leon? Lol I forgot, but it does involve some character I would know, right? Also I love the quote about falling… it encapsulates such a mood. And the middle bottom picture, so…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 Thanks! I will definitely check that out!
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Loopy replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
wow That’s really pretty!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
One thing I like about these scenes is that it gives a little more of a glimpse of Libbie’s relationship with her brother Abe. I feel like he’s not a very well developed character in the story, but I want to find a way to change that.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore Here, I’ll post you some more.
The first day of school arrived at long last. I pulled out my pinafore to cover the front of my dress, and thought of how long it had been since I’d worn it. My hair was braided neatly in two braids, and I scrubbed my face clean. My shoes no longer fit me, and Mama said we’d hav…[Read more]
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Light Warrior Pen replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 9 months ago
Ooo, mushy! I like it.
@acancello @trailblazer @ everyone-else-on-here
So … I’m planning to get two of my characters engaged! Anyone have tips on proposal scenes?
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