SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@savannah_grace2009

Ellis told Fennin what his decision was and he told Zahlin that he was going to train Hedieh. He hasn’t mentioned it to anyone else yet.

@beth-torres

Yeah, I think that would be fine.

@savannah_grace2009

Ellis was in the middle of talking with Zahlin, but I guess we can just say that that this is after that.

@trailblazer

Nooo!! Aww, poor Albert!! 😭😭

@savannah_grace2009

What happened with the dragon pics . . . ?

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

Here’s the next part:

May was an unusually dry month, drier than any I’d seen before. Pa and Mama were fearful of fires, always exercising caution when cooking. Any wayward spark from the chimney could catch the dry brush and start an inferno.

On a Sunday afternoon, shortly after we’d finished planting, Mam…[Read more]

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

OK, thanks for the input! Maybe I’ll just write a couple scenes in Etta’s POV and see what happens… I wouldn’t have to keep them as part of the story, but maybe it would be helpful to see some of my characters from a different set of eyes.

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

“I don’t want him to think that I…um…like him or anything like that, and what if he doesn’t want to go to the dance with me? Then him telling me that would be even worse for him, and making him go to the dance with me if he doesn’t want to would be miserable.”

Fynn nodded his head to the side. “True.” But he still held…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

IKR!??! And it’s like, you KNOW that something is being deleted off your phone or computer because all of a sudden, breaking through silence, the Nom noM happens.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay.  I didn’t think he did but it never hurts to ask I guess. Lol.

@savannah_grace2009

A dinosaur hunting weasel who loves this thing called a… Z-something! I really don’t understand.

@savannah_grace2009
Is it implying you think he looks like an ugly dragon? Probably not, but just a guess.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay…what did I just see? Those names made no sense, so I googled who is buck wild, and he’s supposed to be a weasel!!!!!? I really don’t understand. Is he someone no one likes? Or what? I just don’t feel like I get this.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay…be back…should I be nervous?…

@savannah_grace2009 @beth-torres

Tomorrow, when I get a chance, I might have some more dragon pics saved in my folder on our computer…

@savannah_grace2009

I see. Okay, no pictures then. Lol. What does Buck Wild have to do with dragon pictures?

@savannah_grace2009

Is it wierd that when you said it eats posts,  I got a visual at one point of the device yelling NoM nOm in a monster voice as it deleted the message? Just a wierd thought… 😆

It is very different. I went to Tennessee last Christmas (one of three times I’ve seen snow was then). It was sooo cold but it was amazing.

I’m also…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lol! You still have the same forum signature!

@highscribeofaetherium

Sorry

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, okay.

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

I just had this thought: what if I added Etta’s POV to the whole story? Like switching back and forth between Libbie and Etta’s perspectives? I think it would be fun, and might help develop some of the side characters better, but it also might make things more confusing, and for simplicity’s sake might be better…[Read more]

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

Let me know if any of this needs to be fleshed out more (or if it moves too fast and there should be more specific scenarios).

Things are about to get dicey…

1886

Come spring, many changes occurred. The first was Bert Hawley asking Pa for Clara’s hand in marriage. The wedding was planned for June, and Clara w…[Read more]

@beth-torres ( @esther-c )

Here is the summary. With the characters, I just put in some basic details about them. If anyone has any additions/corrections to make, please do.

Currently Active Characters

Heroes

Ottoline @savannah_grace2009 13 years old; pinkish hair; bow and arrow

Amir @esther-c fairly young; dark hair

Kari @trailblazer 14…[Read more]