SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨

@trailblazer

“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most

practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…

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@esther-c

I’m so excited, lol!

@grcr

Who wants to start? I’ve never done this before, so anyone more experienced want to start?

@thearcaneaxiom

what do you mean by a list of names and consonants?

Do you mean names of characters?

@grcr

Thank you! Yes, I do like the name and it seemed to fit her character! That’s funny that you have a sister named Neveah! haha

@thearcaneaxiom

Interesting, so in that case, what would have allowed a universal language to come about? A grand unification? Maybe just a tongue similar to what is happing with English that simply became more…

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@grcr

That would be fun!

@thearcaneaxiom

Great! What language would it be? Would you want a universal Andromedan tongue, or something for each of the groups, or even something else entirely?

Just a universal Andromedan language and some magic words.

@thearcaneaxiom

Makes sense. Though that leaves me with some questions about the first chapter still. Why give Jordan and his wife such a beginning? Despite making it obvious that they are evil, you’ve humanized them by giving them a dying child, and having them feel grief. Also, why did you project Kratos in a negative light almost directly, w…

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@trailblazer

hopefully Kari and Ottoline will be friends! They have some things in common!

@hybridlore

Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants.  This is gonna be fun!

@grcr I love british accents!!!

@hybridlore

Sure since that’s what it sounds like everyone wants.  This is gonna be fun!

@grcr I love british accents!!!

Yeah I still can’t and I’ve tried every day 🙁

@jonas

That’s okay! 🙂

@esther-c @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore

Ottoline is very excited to join the party!

She’s about 5’1 with mid length strawberry blonde hair. She was kidnapped by Pythonos as a baby and experimented on until she escaped at thirteen. So she’s very shy and has a little PTSD from being abused.

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@grcr I don’t know what kind of party it is, haha! You guys can decide, but I have some ideas.

A birthday party? (I wasn’t sure on this one, because we’d have to decide who’s birthday it is)

A costume party?

A fall harvest party?

A super bowl party?

These are just random thoughts, so if you have more, please post! Thank you!

@kydonandwillow

I love it! I have the same thoughts as Cloaked Mystery. Also it might help if you spread out the chapter a little more. The events seem to happen really fast, and the reader barely has time to process before the next event happens. Sorry if that doesn’t make sense, I’m not good at explaining what I mean, haha!  Maybe go more into…[Read more]

@jonas

i like your idea for your universe and books on each of the planets. I had an idea for that once, but it kind of fell apart. Good luck with yours!

@whalekeeper

You’re right, I think it all comes down to personal opinion and morals and your own personal boundaries. If someone wants to write about magic, I would say go for it, as long as they’re careful. And I agree that it is very controversial. I’ve just chosen not to put “good” magic in my story, because that’s just what I believe and what…[Read more]