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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh goodness, a golf cart crash??? (that’s good no one was hurt!)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
@acancello
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
That’s a relief…everyone at school thinks I’m a nerd XD (maybe i am)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Ummm…well…you see….it’s too late for that. lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore
I had a mentor tell me that my plot was all over the place. He “didn’t see where I was going” and it was “too depressing”. After reading that, I was depressed XD but then I sort of realized he was kind of right (as much as I hated to admit he was right lol), and decided to start over. It wasn’t completely starting over; I kept the same…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Hey! Thanks for asking! I’ve been good. I’ve been struggling to find motivation to write, and kind of doubting myself, so writing’s slow. But otherwise, I’m great! I WAS at 23K….but then I HAD to screw up everything, so I started over and am now at 15K. How are YOU?
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@savannah_grace2009
Ugh, I’m sorry! Doubting yourself is the worst. 15k already? That’s really good! Why did you decide to start over?-
@hybridlore
I had a mentor tell me that my plot was all over the place. He “didn’t see where I was going” and it was “too depressing”. After reading that, I was depressed XD but then I sort of realized he was kind of right (as much as I hated to admit he was right lol), and decided to start over. It wasn’t completely starting over; I kept the same…[Read more] -
@savannah_grace2009
Oh, gotcha! XD Aw, yeah. Feedback is hard but your story will benefit from it! I’m glad it’s going well!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character & Background Yard Sale in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
Characters:
- Brian Elrod. He got mixed up with some drug dealers as a teenager, and ran away from home, too ashamed of what he had done to face his family. Now a grown man, he is too afraid to go back home. But when his sister disappears, he knows he can’t hide for long. Can he get the courage to help save his family before its too late?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character & Background Yard Sale in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @janellebelovedpig
Heyyy! I’m adding some of mine!
Storyline
- A teenage girl discovers a dark secret about her family history. Her parents aren’t as normal as she once thought-they’re CIA agents. They’ve been captured by a ruthless gang called the Red Razors, armed with dangerous mind reading technology and high tech weapons. At…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 5 months ago
Me and my characters have conversations.
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Just make sure you don’t talk aloud to them XD having conversations with invisible people is usually taken as a sign of insanity!
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Ummm…well…you see….it’s too late for that. lol
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Im glad I’m not the only one who does 😀
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That’s a relief…everyone at school thinks I’m a nerd XD (maybe i am)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
@acancello
forgot to tag you!-
@acancello
Of course! It’s been a while since I talked to you!
Oh, cool! Was it weird without a lot of family there? We’ve always lived really far away from my grandparents and cousins, so I don’t think we’ve ever had family over for Thanksgiving. But my mom’s parents and her brother’s family are thinking about moving out here soon.…[Read more]-
It’s currently at like 3k lol
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@savannah_grace2009
Hi! How are you?-
Hey! Thanks for asking! I’ve been good. I’ve been struggling to find motivation to write, and kind of doubting myself, so writing’s slow. But otherwise, I’m great! I WAS at 23K….but then I HAD to screw up everything, so I started over and am now at 15K. How are YOU?
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@savannah_grace2009
Ugh, I’m sorry! Doubting yourself is the worst. 15k already? That’s really good! Why did you decide to start over?-
@hybridlore
I had a mentor tell me that my plot was all over the place. He “didn’t see where I was going” and it was “too depressing”. After reading that, I was depressed XD but then I sort of realized he was kind of right (as much as I hated to admit he was right lol), and decided to start over. It wasn’t completely starting over; I kept the same…[Read more] -
@savannah_grace2009
Oh, gotcha! XD Aw, yeah. Feedback is hard but your story will benefit from it! I’m glad it’s going well!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
oooh yessssssssssss! I actually think that Vikii dying might be a good character arc…unless of course it’s not necessary. Maybe she gets shot and ALMOST dies or something. that way they realize how important they are to each other. just a thought.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
OH MY GOSH FREEDOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEND ME THE LINK!!!!!!!! I’LL PAY EXTRA FOR A SIGNED COPY……………hehe
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
I KNOW!!!!!!! I stayed up until like 10 last night making it…it was worth every minute of sleep I lost, lol
you are correct!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
@acancello
If you don’t send me a copy of your book………AHHH! I NEED MORE HUGO SCENES! I LOVE HIM!!!!!!! BUT I KNOW VIKKI DIES SO IT WILL BE SOOO SAD BUT I DON’T CARE I STILL WANT TO READ EVERY SINGLE HUGO SCENE!!!!!!!!!-
Lol!!!! I actually might not have Vikii die, Hugo seems to need her in his life. I honestly am thinking super hard about it though, my brother is all like “You better keep Vikii, Allison or I will give your book a one star review!” XD I know he really wont but the thought is hilarious. Ill try to post some scenes today…
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oooh yessssssssssss! I actually think that Vikii dying might be a good character arc…unless of course it’s not necessary. Maybe she gets shot and ALMOST dies or something. that way they realize how important they are to each other. just a thought.
(btw, don’t be suprised if I gush over Hugo…I LOVE HIMMM!)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
YESSS PICS ARE WORKING AGAIN!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
What do you think?
Guess who this board is for???
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Um….yeah……..same…
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Yeah. My cousin whos 2-3 years younger than me was driving and I was in the passenger seat and all the others were in the back . She (not trying to be mean or anything) but she did not pay attention to anything around her. Her brother was chasing the cart trying to jump in and everyone was yelling at him to stop, she turned around, but kept her…[Read more]
@acancello
Oh no! That’s scary!
@acancello
Yikes! I’m glad no one was hurt, but that sounds scary!