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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Book Topic Updates in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@godlyfantasy12 👍🏻😊🥰 What is your WIP about? I’d love to hear if you wanted to share!
@freedomwriter76 That advice is SO SPOT-ON! Love it!! 🙂
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
“Let’s get started. And let’s find our families.”
Dawn’s light crept through the windows, a dusky illumination filling the castle corridor. This gave Payton a clearer image of the man beside him.
“Right.”
Payton’s eyes had grown accustomed to the dark, and now he squinted as light began filtering in through the window.
The…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
XD I try to make sure know one else is around unless I know they would understand….
I just found where we picked off 🙂
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
“Payton!?! Why didn’t you tell me you were supposed to be going next? I guess being stuck inside a creepy old castle has affected your memory….Now go and find a way out!!”
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Book Topic Updates in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 Hey that is still a good start!! 👍🏻😊
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Queen_of_Alvastia started the topic Book Topic Updates in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Okie dokie! Here’s the writing topic which I have finally added.
Where are you in your WIP?
I’m about halfway in my story. I can’t remember how much I told you about what is going on….
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 I know! And you love them even while they proceed to break your heart and make you cry buckets of tears 😭🥰
😊😊😊
Good! Okay, I’m just getting it set up… This is making me so happy 🙂
👍🏻🙂 I went back and checked and I think it’s Leon’s turn now. (pg 54)
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 You’re welcome!! 🤗🥰🥰
I love the broken characters so much! Their stories….AAAH!! 😢😭😪 Hmmmm, I can’t decide which one
makes me cry moreI mean, I like more…WHY did I not see that!?! Sorry for the somewhat obvious question XD Thank you!! I’ll get that started!
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I love stories that make me cry in case you can’t tell! 😉😊
YES! HE DOES!!
Oh my word!! AMAZING!! I am NOT EVEN KIDDING! Never ever stop writing!!! That’s not a cliche phrase, I mean it 100%!!
Here is me immediately after reading Riker’s story: 😮😢😲🙁
Here is me again a few minutes later after I get over being blown away:…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 You’re so welcome!! That’s so true! “God makes everything beautiful in its time.” (Ecclesiastes 3:11)
I haven’t read The Boy in Striped Pajamas yet. I’ve seen it before though. What is it about? I love getting new book recommendations! 🙂
YES!! HE NEEDS THEM!! No you can’t!! Way too much sadness!! 😥🙄😪😓
I want to know about…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter
I love your story plot!! That’s amazing!! What made you decide to pick that particular time period? (Oooh that is hard! 😉)
Aadelheide dies!?! NO! Leon, poor guy, must be absolutely positively heartbroken!! Please tell me his kids are OK!!
** I’m not sobbing anymore, I’m wailing! **
Wait, who is Riker? (I love that name too!…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter I LOVE DOING THIS! And I’m so proud of Payton for not showing his obnoxious side lol
Payton
“And I promise I will help you find your brother. No matter how long it takes.”
Payton didn’t release his grip on Leon’s hand. Together in this world of dark tunnels, stones, and fear, he knew for certain he’d found someone he could rel…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 You’re welcome!! 🤗😊
I’m a slow writer too so I get you! I am not afraid of spoilers!! Fire away!! I must know XD
(And you better have a happy ending in mind for Leon….he needs it!!!!)
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 Understatement! I need to read Leon’s actual story now 😉😊😭😥
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
crying. AGAIN
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 2 years ago
@whalekeeper
I guess he would be a High King? Since he can’t be Warden for anyone? -
Ava Blue replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon I love them all! Dang, you’re really good at interesting dialogue. That first one is both adorable and hilarious, and that last one is so sweet 🥰
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 Our poor characters!!! Sometimes their feelings must be sacrificed for the good of the plot! Sorry, guys! Believe me I really am!!!! (or so I say before throwing Payton smack into the middle of another conflict…This will help the book, Payton, I promise)
***composes myself before trying to get into Payton’s head…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 2 years ago
It’s the exact opposite for me: my mom is a High Queen and my dad’s a Throne Warden.
😊😊
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 That just shows the quality of your writing! I love it!! Stories that reach my heart are the best!!
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