Rose Everdeen

@freedomwriter76 Aaaaaw! I LOVE IT! 🥰🥰🥰

@freedomwriter76 Oh yeah and if you feel the need to rant about Riker I’m here to listen lol

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Thank you! It’s taken several spins that I would never ever have expected but I love it anyway XD

@freedomwriter76 Thank you! Glad I can make that work! 😊 Yeah that makes sense 🙂

@ava-blue You’re welcome! Yes please do!! I want NEED to hear about everyone else’s characters!! Thank you 😉 I just love the medieval time period…so that’s basically where any of my stories/ideas take place XD

Okay okay so….

My current WIP: It’s a sequel to m…[Read more]

@koshka thank you! Not even Grammarly caught that. There is more to the story, that snippet isn’t actually supposed to be the first scene. Bronwen is hunting rocky mountain elk in late autumn when she realizes she made a mistake whil navigating and she can’t find her way back; then the rest of the story is just an excuse to write about…[Read more]

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Payton

“Let’s just go down then, since that’s the way we were already going.”

This sounded like good common sense to Payton. Also, he became so excited about what they were doing and dashed off down the open hallway. Then he skidded to a halt, and cocked his head, glancing at Leon.

“Did you hear that sound?”

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Little question for you guys:

Would this scenario make sense if you read it:

A man (ok ok it’s my MC – poor guy 🙄) is trapped in a burning barn b/c he went in there to get a horse out. He’s also a bit claustrophobic (which I didn’t realize until I stuck him in there). Anyway the horse spooks, he falls toward a wall and outs out his hands to stop…[Read more]

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I think you have an interesting start here….I could see exactly the scene you were describing. And yes, I would like to hear more of Bronwen’s life story 😊

One paragraph along, over here! Here is the paragraph:

There’s Old Gimp. He’s straddling the skyline, bony antlers scraping winter-worn sod. A small harem of cows meander on the hillside below him, feeding on straggly grass. I just need him to come down from that saddle. The fallen leaves on which I’ve been lying prone for the last half hour are…

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@freedomwriter76 SO CUTE

I love the ice cream cone and the spongebob faces 😀 the picture of the little boy works perfectly for him!

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Payton

“Come on, Payton, let’s get a move on.”

Payton released the windows. So close to family and freedom and at the same time so, so far away. He shook himself back to the present moment, restraining an impulse to dash down the hallway in search of unbarred windows. Excitement sent his eyes sparkling, resembling the emera…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 👍🏻😊🥰 What is your WIP about? I’d love to hear if you wanted to share!

@freedomwriter76 That advice is SO SPOT-ON! Love it!! 🙂

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“Let’s get started. And let’s find our families.”

Dawn’s light crept through the windows, a dusky illumination filling the castle corridor. This gave Payton a clearer image of the man beside him.

“Right.”

Payton’s eyes had grown accustomed to the dark, and now he squinted as light began filtering in through the window.

The…[Read more]

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XD I try to make sure know one else is around unless I know they would understand….

I just found where we picked off 🙂

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“Payton!?! Why didn’t you tell me you were supposed to be going next? I guess being stuck inside a creepy old castle has affected your memory….Now go and find a way out!!”

@freedomwriter76 Hey that is still a good start!! 👍🏻😊

@freedomwriter76 I know! And you love them even while they proceed to break your heart and make you cry buckets of tears 😭🥰

😊😊😊

Good! Okay, I’m just getting it set up… This is making me so happy 🙂

👍🏻🙂 I went back and checked and I think it’s Leon’s turn now. (pg 54)