Grace W.

I agree with @jada-mae that you need a little more information here. What is the goal of the story? Yes, she wants to, and gets to be, and army nurse, (probably don’t want to give away the part about her getting what she wants) but why must she destroy the contents of the mysterious safe? Why her? I think there needs to be more information…[Read more]

I suppose I could always try the balancing thing and just cut out the omniscient parts later if they don’t work out …

Ugh, I got a little writing done, but … I’m gum-stuck in the details.

I can’t decide whether to use a balance of Third Person Omniscient and Third Person Limited, (I mean having a sort of background narrator who puts in a little introduction at the beginnings of scenes/chapters, and who then defers to his characters’ own points of view sort…[Read more]

Ugh, I got a little writing done, but … I’m gum-stuck in the details.

I can’t decide whether to use a balance of Third Person Omniscient and Third Person Limited, (I mean having a sort of background narrator who puts in a little introduction at the beginnings of scenes/chapters, and who then defers to his characters’ own points of view sort…[Read more]

Ugh, I got a little writing done, but … I’m gum-stuck in the details.

I can’t decide whether to use a balance of Third Person Omniscient and Third Person Limited, (I mean having a sort of background narrator who puts in a little introduction at the beginnings of scenes/chapters, and who then defers to his characters’ own points of view sort…[Read more]

Yes! *Dives in with a will and nerdy computer glasses*

@daeus @bluejay @dragon-snapper , room for me, I hope? I can write until 9:00 EST

Hannah and I (she may have mentioned it already) have a theory also about Snoke being the reincarnation of The Emperor/Palpatine, who I loathe. Ugh, when he pushed Mace Windu out of that window and Anikin did nothing…
I don’t know how that would work, but it’s an idea.

@dragon-snapper: You mentioned that Rey lived in an abandoned X-wing. However, I’m pretty sure it was an AT-AT (synonymous with an Imperial Walker, I think…). I didn’t catch the thing about the pilot doll, though! That’s cool!
Oh, and your theory about the little sister? Yes!!!!! I have actually wanted that to happen long before I got on…[Read more]

I understand, @daeus . I’ve been pretty busy myself lately …

(Speaking of which, my apologies to anyone who may have tagged me in the last week or so. I’ll try and get back to you soon!)

I’ll probably write around then too, @dragon-snapper. You can tag me later if you need a pal. 🙂

That’s cool, @bluejay . Just tag me later if you want to write. 🙂

I’m still available to write if anyone wants to join me. @jess @daeus @bluejay etc. 🙂

I’m back! Sorry I’ve been so absent. It’s been a busy couple of weeks. Would any of you like to write with me? Fifteen to thirty minutes, your choice. 🙂

@Anna-Brie Ah, I should have guessed that. There’s only one first. 🙂 That is odd about the fireworks; over here, it’s the big cities that do it. I wonder if ours look different than yours. Lately, they’ve been coming out with shaped fireworks, like a heart or a smiley face. I don’t like them as much. Do you have that kind over there?

@bluejay I…[Read more]

@luke-c Howdy! Welcome to the Realm of the KeePers! 🙂

@julia-r That’s neat! My aunt is from Michigan, and she’s been wanting to take us to Mackinac Island for years. It sounds like a neat place.

@anne-swiftblade: I love your profile picture! I love the Witch of Blackbird Pond as well! I haven’t been able to get my hands on To Kill a Mockingbird yet, but it has come highly recommended. Who wrote it?