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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Oh gracious. I’m trying to visualize how this would work/look like. XD
BTW, Sypher looks and acts pretty much like a 14 year old (he’s marginally older as his people have a slightly longer life spans than most people) just a 4 1/2 foot 14 year old. I don’t remember if I said his age…XD
Sypher
The world spun was a cacophony of color…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@keilah-h @raxforge @theshadow
Much appreciation :]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Sypher
He looked up at this Rax person less than two feet taller than him and frowned. “I’m a little old to be riding shoulders, but…” a smile darted across his face. “If you wouldn’t mind my following you, I could use a wave breaker just about now. You know, follow in your wake. I’d be much obliged.”
He stuffed his hands into his…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 4 days ago
What translation of the Bible do you prefer?
NIV: The Nearly Inspired Version
NLT: The Not Literal Translation
KJV: The Knoweth Jesus Version
NKJV: The Not Knoweth Jesus Version
NASB: The Nerdy Academics’ Snooty Bible
ESV: The Elect Standard Version
CSB: The Cool Southern Baptist version
(Translation names taken from the Babylon Bee)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Sypher
Rax. Ben. These must be their short names. Sypher glanced between the two strangers, his lips pressed in a thin blue line.
Then he blinked and looked away. Maybe these people were strange, but this place was even stranger, so what else was a sprite to expect?
“Syph. You may call me Syph.” He waved a hand to the vaulted door…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Sypher
The blow had sent him tumbling to the pavement, a sudden pool of water softening his landing. The sprite slowly picked himself up and dusted the droplets off. His shoulders relaxed as the puddle evaporated back into vapor.
The towering figure was still there along with…too many other people. A darker blue flush crept up the…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Ooh ty for the tag! I looove world building, and I guess I take a lot of inspiration from different places, then try to connect the general ideas with reasons for them being if that makes sense. Like I might have the idea of a world with 5 different nations, I might want to have a magic system everyone can use, and have all of the…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Ok, I’m tagging a lot of people for this, but don’t feel obligated to reply.
So, I’ve gotten stuck in my current WIP, but as I work through that slowly, I want to return to an older WIP that I worked on over the summer and really want to refine. It’s only in a first draft, but I’d like to have a critique partner for it.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Participants/potential participants:
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity @raxforge
Haha! Sounds good.
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TheShadow started the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 4 weeks ago
Hello all, how’s everyone doing?
Recently, while writing my first draft for my WIP, I have been struggling with scenes actually connecting to each other and running in a smooth way that makes sense. Additionally, I feel like I’m forcing my characters to do something without actually letting them decide and let their decisions have consequences.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I kind of made it day. It’s like when Joshua had the sun and moon stand still….talk about taking verses out of reference.
Sorry, I realized I didn’t tag you in the intro RP.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I think I already know them. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Awesome! I’ll stick him outside the school (and let’s say it’s like, 7:30 am).
Also, he’s a character I made up for my sister’s story, so she has the right to correct me on things, or adjust stuff that doesn’t fit as she likes.
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Sypher is a water sprite. He is tall for his people at 4 feet 5 inches (
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Yeah, actually….how would Rac like to meet a character of mine? We’d have to jump it to the morning (night time aught to be over by now anyway), but if you’d like I’ll throw Syph in.
Rae’s Alpha might actually like to meet him too….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Thanks guys!! 😊💛
Nothing like a before/after to boost your artist confidence. I like Lily best, she looks sweet.
Fr.
Thanks!! Yeah, Lily’s sweet……. she’s supposed to be a lot more jolly and energetic than i drew her, but oh well. she’s actually a crazy lil gal.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
People join and leave and join again. You’re free to start interacting anew with anyone you want, as long as you ask first, or you can decide to stop. 🙂
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Kefa replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Nice? No, it looks perfect! (I am not bias or anything…)
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Actually, I’mma remake the moodboards, hehehe. So they shall be revealed later this week. :PP
@esther-c
I replied but didn’t tag you. Not sure if you got it.
I would be willing to try and help with this. You know my views on Romance are rather different than norm, and I believe highschool romantic relationships aren’t healthy. But I’m willing to give it a shot.
I also do edit. I’m not a line-by-line editor, but I have worked as a plot/character/story editor before.
We do have different beliefs on…[Read more]
I appreciate the offer!! Truly!
But like you said, we might not work super well together because of our different viewpoints. So yeah, right now I’d say no, but I will keep you in mind! :))
No problem! I can be your last resort if no one else offers. 😉
Sounds good. 😉 Let me know if you want to be tagged when I post the chapters on here some time! :))
Mm. Sounds interesting, but I’m totally unqualified. I don’t think I’d be able to help much… Sorry… 😅😑
Hey no worries! 🤗
I’m sorry, I don’t think I can help you 🙁
That’s totally fine, girl! ☺️
I’m definitely interested in reading your novel, but I’ve read almost no YA, so I wouldn’t be much help.
No worries! I’ll be sure to tag you tho when I start sharing it on here!!
Awesome! 🙂
@esther-c I would love to help! This went into my spam for some reason, so I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you. Are you still looking for someone?
Actually…I think you might be perfect. You gave some great feedback on my short story, so I’m sure you could do the same for my novel! :))
I’ll PM you later this week with more details and the link to the doc. Thank you so much!!! 🤗
Awesome! I love family and sibling dynamics, and I also read a good amount of YA, so this seems right up my alley! (Although I won’t be able to help much with the 90s references, haha.)
Do you still have my email from the short story critique?
Yay yay!! (Oh I know, right?? I’ve asked my parents and some other older writers I’ve met through KDWC, and even though they gave me a lot to use [plus Google, lol], there’s still something difficult about getting it right since I didn’t live then 🤪)
Yes I believe so!
@esther-c Yeah, that totally makes sense! I was gonna say, ask your parents xD. But I’m sure it’s still difficult.
Great!! 😄
I may have to get some YA recs from you sometime, because I struggle to find clean fiction that I would actually enjoy 😭
Oh definitely! I’m sure I can come up with a list. Middle grade stuff can be great if it’s well done, because content is so much better. 😉
@hybridlore
Please tag me if you post recommendations! I want to read YA, but it’s usually filthy and cringe.
For sure!! Until you come across that one middle school relationship that somehow works out perfectly. 😂
Ok for some reason even though I still see your comments on the short story doc, it won’t let me view your email. 😅 Could you share that again with me so I can share the other doc?? I’ll tell you as soon as I see it if you don’t want to leave your email up.
Awesome! Tysm!! I’ll probably send you the doc tomorrow since I need to make a few notes on it first. :))
Ok I added you to the document! You should get an email about it I believe. (:
Hoo boy. I’d love to, but uhhhh…I wouldn’t be any help. I’m a terrible critiquer and my romance experience is practically nil. You would probably help me more than I help you….sorry!
Funny enough though, my own romance work (a fanfic) took place in 1970 in New Mexico. What are the odds?
Ahh, no problem! :))
No way! That’s so cool! XD
Yeah it was just a consequence of how the original story was set up, but it’s funny to think about.
I doubt your characters will experience anything even close to mine though lol
Oh dear, was it a Star Wars fanfic?? In that case, I hope my charries aren’t handling the types of weapons they use. 🤣
No, it was something else, but yeah there were a lot of weapons involved XD
My Star Wars fanfics don’t really cross over into our world. Yet.
Though I suppose in a fanfic, you could do whatever 🤷🏻♀️
Oh duhhhh 🤦🏻♀️ I’ve watched like all the Star Wars movies, I should know they don’t take place on earth 🤣
lolllll no biggie.