Andrew

@hybridlore

AHEM… Does this mean what I think it does?? 😭

Umm…no comment

Oh, and I looked up that song and it totally fits. Thanks for the suggestion!

I’m not sure when I’ll have chapter 11 for you. I’m kinda stumped right now. As soon as I finish I’ll post 11, don’t worry.

@anyone

These are my two charries:

Leith and Reid Grath 

As far as looks, they’re almost identical. Both have the signature black hair of their grandfather and father, but their eyes are blue with slit pupils. Their sclerae are normal. On their left cheeks, they have a triangular reptile scale that’s around to fingerwidths in size and their…[Read more]

@rae you can totally join!

@theshadow haha yep! I’ll try to find a video of him playing it or something

@whalekeeper nooooo I don’t want twenty-three characters to disappear into nothing forever

lol it’s your story do whatever you want and ignore my weird rants haha

This is all speculating from reading books that do this; I’m no expert 😅

I know you already got help from Min and I don’t have much to say 🙂 But a couple things.

I keep using the same phrases to describe my character’s struggles, thought processes, or even how they’re interpreting the themes in their own lives.

It might help to not say those phrases at all. Brainstorm all the easiest ways to say your theme in the story…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thank you so much!

I’m hoping to get some of my new stuff on here soon.

Little late here, but @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint great art from all three of you 🙃 Everyone keeps improving so quickly.

@keilah-h

Thx for the thoughts. The ending is already planned out and I will not reveal anything. 😁

@lightoverdarkness6

I’m so glad you approve of his scene!!! I was worried for a minute there because I don’t know what his everyday life is like.

@rae

and the twin I really want to rp with is a young teen, but he’s rather immature.

My charrie is pretty good at monitoring immature children. I’ll try to get her in here if my mind is apt enough; I’ve been in RP burnout for quite some time lol.

@freed_and_redeemed

i just left you a little gift on goodreads!

😀

*cracks door, pears inside*

Hello?

I used to be in a group on here with Freedom, Sara and Jonas, but Sara won’t be back here for a while yet (unless I miss my guess) Jonas hasn’t been that active recently and Freedom is off and on so I’m just gonna ask if I can add a charrie I’ve been dying to rp with, plus his twin. And place them somewhere…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

thank you for telling me about Alcatraz. That makes sense.

I read your chapter. I like it a lot, though Eric is not my kinda guy. 😂

sooo, btw, I’m not sure how affiliated you are with military, but you do know what will happen if Alan becomes a deserter, right? He’ll be killed if they catch him.

It’s pretty unive…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’m bad at plotting, but I can try.

@ellette-giselle

Ugh, your going to make me spoil the whole thing, are you? It has been a while since I read the final book, but, without giving too much away, here are the lessons that the book leaves the reader with:

Just because you aren’t perfect doesn’t mean you can be a hero. You may have flaws (like small, not very powerful Smedry…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

So, if editing doesn’t count, they’re chilling out with some blankets and hot cocoa somewhere chilly and relaxing with a fireplace and books and comfy couches since I’m done writing them for the next several months 😁😆

Now you’re gonna make me cry happy tears!

Man, I can’t wait until Nahim can do that, but alas, he doesn…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I thought it was you who mentioned it.

I don’t know if you saw my question, so I’ll just ask it again. 😀

I was wondering if Alcatraz ever has some sort of redemption. I mean, I don’t want him to become a perfect character because he does good deeds, but he also kinda isn’t the best right now. I believe you and I ten…[Read more]

@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter the 16th – The Artist

I will try to get you Chapter the 17th – The Rebel next week, but since I start work and school, no promises. I will send it out in two weeks at the latest, so you can hold me accountable to that deadline.