Andrew

@highscribeofaetherium as a Puerto Rican (well, my parents are, I was born in the US) I approve of that last one strongly. Lol

@linus-smallprint

Next time don’t tell me there is supposed to be a big plot twist in a chapter so I don’t be stoopid and search for more fish.

I only said it because I’ve been reading WAY too much Alcatraz, thanks to you.

BTW, I can’t get over the way you spelled “Stupid”.

@esther-c

Great! I’m always here if you want to bounce more ideas. I love listening to ideas and helping form plots. 😉

@linus-smallprint

Ohhh, that hurts!! Ohhh, poor Martha! You can feel her pain! This is one of THE BEST chapters you have ever written, which is kinda funny since you wrote about a girl in this one. You could just really feel her and really relate to her thoughts. Man, it was just so good. Like, super, super good. Cracking job old boy! (lol)

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@koshka @loopylin @keilah-h

Rory 

Rory snapped into an alert posture as two strangers entered the room. He could see them in his peripheral vision, and his first thought was ambush. As soon as the two girls started yammering at each other Rory relaxed a little. Leo’s obvious military awareness was putting him on edge almost as much as nails on…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ayla

“Fine.” Mr. Crosshair said. “We can do it your way, if you’re so sure you know how this castle works.”

I probably knew more than him at any rate. He looked like he was more into sci fi.

“Spectacular!” I stepped into the hallway, brandishing my new sword. “Let’s go questing!”

@highscribeofaetherium

Go ahead!

@ellette-giselle aww scales, I messed up your tag lol

@ellete-giselle @koshka @loopylin

Hunter

“So I keep hearing about this huge dance? What’s going on with all that?” Rory asked.

“Well, it’s…um….it’s…” Hunter searched for how to correctly explain. “They’re going to have a party here, and an open dance floor, I guess. And everyone will be in fancy clothes and things. All the older boys…[Read more]

@loopylin

Once he gets bored or figures out how bad these guys are, he’ll leave. He still has some standards.

The Society: does some not nice stuff

Dante: Nope, I’m out

The Society: why?

Dante:

sorry for pulling Sniper into this like I have with everything lately…..haha…..but I couldn’t NOT use the meme for this purpose.

@grcr ohhh makes total sense! Very cool!!

@linus-smallprint I’m getting caught up!

Eric, I feel ya about how you’d rather be drawing than be sporty. LOL.

You should give a glossary of Rorian words at the end or something! It might help the jokes stick better. The explanations actually make it funnier than the jokes would be alone, but I still feel like something’s missing. I like it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I could put one in, cause I have a bunch, but don’t really feel like it because writing from the perspective of morally bad characters is really hard for me lol

@calyhuge no, it specifically isn’t supposed to really affect the school, but it’s used as an explanation as to why there’s so many military oriented characters here, and that kinda thing.

@grcr nice!! I like their clothes, what time period are they from? (IDK anything about that lol)

@koshka what’s raspberry blood?????

@ellette-giselle oof I haven’t been active here haha, sorry.

@smiley ooh nice!! interesting character concepts.