Andrew

@ellette-giselle

I don’t know. I see that stuff really fast, but it might just be me. Do you want it to come as a shock? 

It doesn’t need to be a shock. It might be fine then.

Those are my two guesses, but they both have problems.

Okay. I will say your second one is incorrect (remember, I told you earlier that I am trying to avoid demonic el…[Read more]

@theducktator

I would mostly agree with what other people are saying, but not quite. It is going to be easier to fit in more characters if you have a series over a stand-alone. However, I have read a few series that were long, but still had too many characters. Robert Jordan’s Wheel of Time was an example of this as well as the graphic novel…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Rory pulled the gloves from his pocket. Gave a nervous laugh. “Yeah, I have them. What do you want me to do? climb down the wall with them?”

“Yup.” Leo smiled and shrugged. “Unless you have a better idea. I’m not leaving you here, kid.”

Rory’s green eyes widened. The kid glanced towards the window and shuddered. No won…[Read more]

@rae Nice, I like it. Always liked that historical event, it reminds me of how people in the Civil War had to fight against their own relatives. It shows how some Germans saw other human beings in the trenches, and managed to relate to them, which is a really brave thing to do in a war.

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know. I see that stuff really fast, but it might just be me. Do you want it to come as a shock?

By the way, do you have any guesses for why Alan was able to defeat his attackers so easily while Stripe was easily beaten?

Two.

One, capturing Alan’s father is a decoy because for some reason the king wants Alan to…[Read more]

@raxforge @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @the_lost-journal

Ah! You all hit me with a snowball!

So I wrote a short story

The True Magic of Christmas
 

December 25th, 1914.

I dread the date. Usually I would be at home, home with little Henry and Mum, but not this year. I will miss them more than usual tomorrow. Oh, if only this war had never…

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@ellette-giselle

To say I didn’t know the minute Alan’s father made the plan would be lying.

I knew he was going to get caught.

Yeah, I suppose it was clear that would happen. Do you think it is too obvious?

Then I think it will flow much better for Alan,l and it totally makes sense for his character and fits very well.

Give him a different tra…

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@ellette-giselle @loopylin @rae @raxforge @jonas @grcr @hybridlore

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

The hand motions were a little unfamiliar, but Marcel could guess from Leon’s expression that they weren’t in any immediate danger.

Marcel made the same hand motion. “We’re good.”

He was slightly dissatisfied with the answer, since Felicity and…[Read more]

@rae   @raxforge   @loopylin   @hybridlore   @jonas   @grcr    @whalekeeper

Leon and Julian — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

Leon’s expression clouded with worry as Marcel gestured to his ears. He can’t hear!

Marcel’s next words confirmed the suspicion. “Can’t hear. Are they close?”

Leon shook his head and gave Marcel the Imperial Military “a…[Read more]

@koshka

Don’t test me. I’ll target you next! 😆

@whalekeeper

6 snowballs…? Wow, Whaley. That’s… intense. XD

@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @jonas @grcr

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

Marcel strained, trying to listen to Leon’s reply. Something was very wrong with his ears. Hopefully it wasn’t permanent. The buzzing had escalated into a high-pitched siren.

“Monsters… Huge…” Then Leon shook his head.

Marcel winced and…[Read more]

@loopylin

That’s… four snowballs…

Give me a moment, y’all

😈

…

NOOO *Whams you with a giant ball of snow* *Now you’re rolling down the hill*

@you +6 snowballs 💨⚪💨⚪💨⚪💨⚪💨⚪💨⚪

@rae   @raxforge   @loopylin   @grcr   @hybridlore  @jonas  @whalekeeper

Leon and Julian— Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)

Leon watched as the girl raced off, followed by Ben, Flare, and Brutus. Or, was it Baron. Leon’s brows drew together. Something wasn’t right about him. whatever the case, Leon was secretly glad he was gone. though part…[Read more]

@liberty

Oh. *contented sigh* I love the clincher here!

😆 Thank you!

*Still following <3*

@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @loopylin @grcr @hybridlore @jonas

Marcel — Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)

Felicity said something to him, but her voice sounded like a faint buzz underwater. No matter, she was clearly leaving, and a bunch of the group followed close behind.

Marcel watched the white braids fly off, brow furrowed in worry. He…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION

Stephen and David continued to grow, and Joseph found himself looking up to them in many ways. Mr. Caddick was always a source of wisdom, and Joseph found himself coming to him often. It seemed so strange to Joseph that they all looked up to him,…

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@linus-smallprint

btw, thanks for the “guy-talk” scene. 😉